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why does he keep his thoughts from me? What's he trying to hide? Is he thinking about the neighbor's grass? How it's always greener on the other side? He just listens, and stares, but he won't tell me why. I sit and watch him for hours, eventually, he'll just sigh. He'll turn around slowly, swish his tail like a mop. He'll pause, as if eager to speak... but continues on, without another stop. So now I'm left here to wonder what he's thinking, full of confusion and doubt. But I bet if horses could talk, he'd ask me what I was thinking about.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/28/2011 1:58:00 PM
Sommar, Cool to see a great poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:54:00 PM
this is one of the cleverest ones on the list. An excellent ending you put on it. Congrats for being in the winner's circle. I enjoyed the read.
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Date: 6/23/2011 5:29:00 PM
Good one..Very creative..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 6/23/2011 5:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sommer. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 6/23/2011 2:07:00 PM
Congrats Sommer on your excellent win in the horse contest with this exciting entry luv.. full of adventuresome lines ..enjoy..
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Date: 6/23/2011 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Sommer. Love, Carol
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