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If I were To walk the edge of the moon and bark like a loon Or be angry at the blazing day and shun the night as I lay; I would feel glory so sincere for what I revere reverencial fear from bullets of thoughts so clear Amidst the wasted youth of candy coated truth Lies the callous disregard of the heinous and marred bloodied and scarred But I maintain Strain to maintain on an sland of insane... Then I awoke..as if a stranger spoke~ Shalom

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Date: 7/26/2010 2:16:00 PM
Hello Priscilla: Fantastic poem. I really like the line "Irreverence and fear...". Thanks 4 reading and comment on my poem. I hope that you have a great day: Yours truly: Sheol
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