Thinking

If I were To walk the edge of the moon and 
bark like a loon
Or be angry at the blazing day and shun the 
night as I lay;
I would feel glory so sincere for what I revere
reverencial fear from bullets of thoughts so clear
Amidst the wasted youth of candy coated truth
Lies the callous disregard of the heinous and marred bloodied and scarred
But I maintain
Strain to maintain on an sland of insane...
Then I awoke..as if a stranger spoke~

Shalom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 26, 2010 at 2:16 PM
Hello Priscilla: Fantastic poem. I really like the line "Irreverence and fear...". Thanks 4 reading and comment on my poem. I hope that you have a great day: Yours truly: Sheol
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