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Think Twice

Take a breath just pretend to light a cigarette
Mind your every thought so that you'll not regret
Avoid a tactless comment that might go south
Remember ~ a fly does not enter a closed mouth



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on August 11, 2019 for contest ROMANI PROVERB sponsored by JULIA WARD

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2019

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Lindsay Laurie Date: 8/13/2019 10:59:00 PM Hello Line … you've written this well to finish with the proverb. There is not enough think before you act actions - thank you Line - Lindsay Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 8/14/2019 12:16:00 AM Thanks, Lindsay. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf Date: 8/11/2019 12:37:00 PM Really like how you set this up for the Romani proverb final line. I find this a challenging contest, and I'd say that you've (more than) met the challenge! Good luck, Line! :) gw Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 8/11/2019 2:58:00 PM Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 8/11/2019 8:44:00 AM superb Line. A sure winner. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 8/11/2019 2:58:00 PM Thanks for the optimistic compliment, Jeanne.