Premiere Contest WinnerThink of Me Come Nightfall

Think of me as the eyes of late nightfall crawl through a wafting sill where lone moon cuddles dimmed glow before she quietly slowly lays herself on a cradle of clouds as whistle of barn owl and incantations groans. When dusk explodes into ash upon fairways that lap, think of me mysteriously walking on the ledge of our winding grassland picking bluebells in wanderlust. And when candles snuff the lampshades think of me, like the velvet skin of dusk fall circling in a world of marbled thoughts until you etch the back of my spine to lullaby the sourness of truant dreams. The stars play game-spy with the wind rowing into a wave of dewy cruise; I enter into your own lenses, a search light that becomes the harbour of some peace while echoes of unknown voices speak... It is at this juncture when you, perhaps, might think of me lending a gentle taste of assurance that the next hours will stir a brightened sun. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, contest 259 Brian Strand
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Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 5:25 PM
Excellent poetry, Nette. Congrats on your trophy win. Beautiful images!
Paras Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 7:04 PM
Inimitable poetry which takes me to another world beyond verses here on earth. Woman, I bow to thee. Congratulations is not enough!
Jones Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 8:37 AM
From nightfall to sunrise...you captured the magic in between...congratulations on your win nette...a wonderful wonderful reflection of yourself always spills out in your words
Pettit Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 2:39 AM
Congratulations on winning with this very descriptive entry.
Gasun Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 2:30 AM
A superb poem my very dear friend Nette! So love it and so enjoyed. Thank u so much for sharing! And, my hearty congratulations on your great win! Thank u as well for stopping by on my page. Sorry if my expression of gratitude comes only now. Always busy & just arrived home fr. 3-day Camp. Hope u're doin well. Mind me, w/ God's mercy d effect of protest in my place was a remote. Im stoppin by also to greet u & ur loved ones a very Happy Valentines Day! Wish u d best! love & misses u, Leo
Phookan Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 7:37 AM
Congrats nette again on another great win! It's very nice!! love you..
Kayode Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 3:14 AM
You remain my queen of poetry, congrats nette.
Kayode Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 3:12 AM
You remain my queen of poetry, congrats nette.
A. Sharma Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 2:25 AM
Wow Nette !! Wonderfully penned, n I liked the wanderlust !! Winner of winners!! Congrats on top win!!
Mehta Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 6:49 PM
Well-penned poem and congrats on the win, nette
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 4:41 AM
Congratulations once again nette xx
Walker  Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 7:16 PM
Congrats on your win... Beautiful. Verlena
Hamilton Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 4:46 PM
I love this poem Nette fantastic pen ty for my place in your contest congrats on win hugs
Richards Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 4:45 PM
I agree with Charlotte......those truant dreams are magnificent!! lovely piece!
Puddifoot Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 4:32 PM
nette, this is another beautiful piece from you, some exquisite phrasing such as "the sourness of truant dreams", and I love that last line...congrats on your win in my contest :)
Parker Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 4:25 PM
Congrats on your win
Undertaker Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 10:03 AM
congrats. great win. (:c Jenish
Anglesey Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 6:46 PM
Nette, your poem is radiant and well deserving of #1 winner...lovely work :)
Seal Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 5:34 PM
Congratulations Nette, a beautiful write and deserving of No 1 place. Take care, Richard
Gasun Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 12:42 AM
Another outstanding poem and masterpiece of yours my very dear friend Nette! I love it & so enjoyed! Thank you so much for sharing as well. MY BIGGEST HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR NUMBER 1 WIN! My biggest sweet hugs and cheers! Have a grace-filled Sunday there! love lots always, Leonora
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August 9, 2013 at 7:32 PM
awesome late night win.....SKAT
Jordan Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 4:48 PM
I have yet to read a poem of yours that didn't take my breath away. I love your writing. You clearly deserve winning this contest. congratulations! Jack
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August 8, 2013 at 9:36 PM
. Nette, enjoyed your late night poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) :-) :-) in Nathan's contest... ALWAYS LINDA
D. Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 8:22 PM
thanks for the entry. and the #1 Nate
Morgan Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 9:03 AM
rate i must, seven i am saying, what a rush, when you came to me with this!
Morgan Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 7:11 PM
Congrats on your win!
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