Think

Are you a shadow 
or maybe a wind gust ?
you could be everything or nothing ...
Why do you have to brake your dreams
in so many unfinished  episodes ?
do you talk often with yourself?
Maybe you are so lonely
because you focus on others,
on making them  your friends ...
poor human being!
you have no peace left.
Are you a people pleaser 
trying to find far away 
what is there, in you, 
in your soul?
Think!

by Florin Andronic
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
April 23, 2026 at 7:30 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 11:17 AM
Florin, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 12:06 PM
Florin, well expressed... I think a wind of gust says pretty much of he or she you are talking of... enjoyed SKAT
Hunjeri Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 5:34 AM
I love this authentic write. It struck a chord with me. Be blessed
Andronic Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 5:03 PM
you too, thank you
Petersen Potter Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 10:05 PM
Very nice pen Florin! I really enjoyed reading your piece dear friend.A 7!Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light!God bless you!:) D."
Andronic Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 10:08 PM
thank you, you too
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