Thingummybob

Who’s that fellow that came, you know, what’s his name?
The one who was quite underweight
He came round last week, with a zit on his cheek
And he mended and painted our gate

Come on, you should know it was you had to show 
Him the things that were needing repair
He was ever so lean and not very clean
And was toothless with bright ginger hair

He had no teeth at all he was ever so tall
And was scrawny and lanky and long
He’d no meat on his frame but was awfully game
And for someone so skinny, quite strong

His mum had dementia he’d mislaid his denture
He came and he did a good job
He was gummy and thin with an odd kind of grin
Oh yes! It was thin gummy Bob
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 12:20 PM
Congratulations, I am so happy to see you on the winners list John W.. Love, Carol
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January 22, 2012 at 9:38 PM
Congratulations on winning in the contest. Good descriptiveness and rhyming in this presentation.
Squyres Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 7:02 PM
Had no idea what that title could be about...and i found this cute conversation poem. !! Enjoyed !! Congrats on your win !!
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 4:29 PM
Your title with this writing is COOL. I enjoyed the read. Congrats.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 1:45 PM
congrats John on a wonderful win for this grand conversatiion piece luv..
Brown Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 11:17 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today John W. Wishing you a New Year filled with inspiration and the best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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