Things I Remember About You

Shared
Seasons
And the years
Dawn, day, dusk, night
And sharing a dinner by candlelight

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Months
Seasons
And the years
Dawn, day, dusk, night
And sharing a dinner by candlelight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 10, 2009 at 9:35 AM
I'm in a quandry, I like the word Shared.being in line one...BUT I agree..in a verse with so few words...I would not use the word share twice......YET..I think? the verse is predominantly about....Sharing life with a special someone...not about...Month. Light & Love
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July 8, 2009 at 12:53 PM
The little pleasures that make a lifetime, wonderfully done! ~Trudy~
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July 8, 2009 at 10:58 AM
Wonderful memories Jim. I don't know this form of poetry but I do know I loved the poem. Love, Carol
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