Things I love

There are so many things I am mad about.
Take sunrise with red clouds and soft rays
Penetrating through the water-laden clouds.
Rain is imminent, thunder threatening afar.
It matters not, for I love to stay cosy indoors.

Soon, it will rain, and with impulsive haste, I’ll
Sit at my beloved baby grand and play 
A few tentative light-hearted arpeggios
Followed by a mesmerising, uplifting allegro
But never finish with some sad dirge.

By noon, the weather clears into a soft breeze
And I proceed to have a meal made up
Of my favourite shellfish and rigatoni 
With shredded truffles and a glass of chilled Chablis.

From that terrace, I could see the turbulent sea,
Its waves roll nonchalantly towards the shore,
Rising and falling, always transient
And showering us with a froth of salty spray,
A sweet caress that tastes so pleasant on my lips.

There are so many things that give me pleasure and satisfaction.
And you, Madam?  I still remember your sensitivity. 
Your glossy lips met mine:   It was the best thing I loved.

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Date: 12/11/2024 10:47:00 AM
Your poem mesmerizing , and the lady mentioned - She was and is the best thing that ever happened to you and you you still love her so much and always remember her, she knows. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Good luck in the contest my friend.
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Date: 12/10/2024 6:45:00 AM
Uplifting and sad at the same time ...
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Date: 12/9/2024 5:31:00 PM
so touching poem, with memories around, simple things are the best, enjoyed the inviting poem, merci mon ami
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Date: 12/9/2024 2:50:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work. Love the smell and feel being around the ocean, and piano music I do love to hear. Showers well since I have to walk the dog, I hate getting wet and having to dry Peanut, but he just doesn't like going out in the rain. I don't blame him he is 15 years old this coming February. look in your facebook messenger
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Date: 12/9/2024 6:58:00 AM
Awwn the ending is so sweet and heart touching dear victor, and the opening is so beautiful it felt like i could see through your well woven words! What a soulful poem, you always have a very poetic way with words and i always enjoy reading your poems. And this is no exception! Hope you are doing well. Sending you light always
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Date: 12/8/2024 3:51:00 PM
Victor, a wonderful poem capturing a great enchanted evening. - hugs
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Date: 12/8/2024 11:54:00 AM
Hi Victor, I am recovering from a crash landing on my floor! Sorry but was not well enough to read you. This is indeed a charming work! It reads like a fairy tale to me. I had many loves in my life. And cherish memories of them all. But I chrish this moment, right now the most! Pangie xx
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Date: 12/8/2024 10:48:00 AM
Lovely poem Victor, some lips we never forget..
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Date: 12/8/2024 4:17:00 AM
Now that sure ended on an upbeat note, loved it!
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Date: 12/7/2024 11:04:00 PM
Dear Victor, your poem beautifully weaves nature's splendor with moments of personal joy, creating a rich tapestry of romance and sensory delight. The vivid imagery of stormy skies, uplifting melodies, and the salty caress of the sea evokes a deep connection to life's fleeting yet profound pleasures. The tender closing lines, recalling the touch of a lover's lips, add a heartfelt intimacy that lingers like a cherished memory. Truly captivating! A fave ...Hugs
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Date: 12/7/2024 5:49:00 PM
Lovely poetry Victor, there are so many things in the world and life to love, especially the memories and kisses shared with the one so loved… Beryl
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Date: 12/7/2024 3:26:00 PM
I am fortunate to have visited so many beautiful, perfect days, through the magic of your imagery rich poetry, Victor. I enjoyed this very much. :)
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Date: 12/7/2024 12:34:00 PM
Dear Victor, I hope that you are feeling better now. Sending healthy wishes Your taste in music, wine, and gourmet food is impeccable, love your romance as well! Viva making-love to poetry. Ooh la la. I want to wish you Happy days now and throughout the Holidays Victor! <3
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Date: 12/7/2024 10:18:00 AM
Wonderful things to love. I am glad to see you posting. I heard a rumor you had cut off comments. Anyway, this is a great poem. I have something to tell you in soupmail I will go there now
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Date: 12/7/2024 8:24:00 AM
So lovely, romantic - the food, the music, the upbeat of life! Hugs
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Date: 12/7/2024 7:14:00 AM
Wonderful memories Victor and I must say a lovely meal.
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Date: 12/7/2024 6:06:00 AM
You stated on the blog that you weren't feeling well. I'm sending best wishes for a quick recovery! I truly like this poem; it had a wonderful conclusion! Victor, you really know your way around a love story!
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Date: 12/7/2024 5:51:00 AM
The love of a good woman, can't beat it with a stick. Hope you're well
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Date: 12/7/2024 5:49:00 AM
- Very romantic and beautiful, Victor ... a little kiss can say more than words :) - hugs
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Date: 12/7/2024 4:54:00 AM
aww s beautiful and romantic. i hope you are feeling better Victor. i saw comments were turned off and you said you didn;t feel well. hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/7/2024 4:43:00 AM
Hi Victor hope your ok. I couldnt comment it said you turn comments off. I saw on the blog you werent feeling well. I hope you are better now. Love this poem of yours the ending was superb. I will read the other ones again and comment on them later on we got two feet of snow and I have to snow blow my driveway. Wishing you good health my friend. TTyl.
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Date: 12/7/2024 4:30:00 AM
You're the master of romance Victor there's so much to be thankful for. I hope you are feeling better now. Tom
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