Vince Suzadail Jr. Poet Quatrain

Things I Don'T Understand

There are things I don't understand
And would really like to know
Such as why they call it rush hour
And you move so freakin' slow

How come you get a learner's permit 
To get a license to drive a car
But they don't give one for a marriage license
Now I think that's going too far

Why do they put deer crossing signs up 
Do you believe there is really any need
In all my years of driving
I've never met a single deer who can read

I was reading a map in the park
And it definitely astonished me so
It had a red X that said you are here
And I was wondering how they know.

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Poet Destroyer A August 24, 2014 at 10:49 AM Hi Vince, Stopping by to check out a few of the featured poems:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always~ LINDA

Christine Costello August 22, 2014 at 8:28 PM I had a good chuckle over this well written poem. Christine:-)

Aiyah Torres August 22, 2014 at 11:59 AM haha... good points ,Vince!! ...a clever poem for you and me... very well done ^_^ keep it high ^_^ _ Aiyah

Tim Kitchen August 22, 2014 at 9:28 AM Love it! Love the humour, Tim

Erina Rain August 22, 2014 at 7:33 AM This made me smile. I like it a lot.

Abdullah Alhemaidy August 20, 2014 at 9:33 PM Very good! It makes me wonder.

Joe Maverick August 20, 2014 at 3:18 PM Yes..' hmm.. I enjoyed following this through its various veiwpoints Vince, I got a bit tangled in the tangly places, but not more that I would'nt have thought, I could..! Knot that it could have been forseen anyhow, L O L)) enjoyed this and welk done on its feature..'

Ana Espinola Collins August 20, 2014 at 1:34 PM Hi Vince...Great write, fun and so true! It made me giggle :) Ana

Teddy Kimathi August 20, 2014 at 8:42 AM Greetings Vince! Your work made me chuckle, and at the same time see the humor that we create and see each day.... Congratulations for having your work featured in PS homepage! Regards, Teddy.

Daver Austin August 18, 2014 at 11:36 AM Hi, Vince. The older I get the more I appreciate your wit. When I feel out of it you make me laugh or agree. Congrats on the selection daver