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Broken heart cracked , as i took my last breath , no one beside me alone again . i sank knives surrounded me? spun out , no way out , of the desired heartt that followed faith in times of the bad mean filthy snake that made adam and eve take that naughty bite. that's were it all striked. Forgive me lord . i am me. surrounded by some of life's most ungrateful broken letdown roads that lead me to the hidden path of dizzy sorrow. Hidden in dark i saw everything in my shadows running from that loud under ground train , if i had stoped to think , . Spirited soul behold you have the big key i need to unhollow, this broken city of unfollowed dreams . You must help me lead rightnouess together forever no longer we hide . We lead the lost into our holy secret place to find themselfs before it was to late . Jesus save's them today please promise you will never leave us alone . Hand by heart we all stand together as one big dream of faith also hope

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Date: 11/2/2016 4:29:00 AM
Ashley Rainwater, what a lovely name, welcome to the soup first of all, you have the heart of a poet, with great potential.
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Ashley Rainwater
Date: 9/29/2017 11:37:00 AM
:) thanks
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Ashley Rainwater
Date: 11/20/2016 2:48:00 PM
god bless u that was awsome of you
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Ashley Rainwater
Date: 11/2/2016 4:37:00 AM
thank you means alot

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