Things Change

This here is the thing.  It is indicated
By a signal coming from a source,
Questioned by a desire for validity,
Soaking in a pool of vapour.

Language gives a structure 
To imaginary fabrication
Whose existence is assumed 
Quite without substantiation

Concrete metaphors convince
Whomsoever desires conviction;
These are entities vibrating
Autogenic deification.

Vine leaves winding round the clock hands
Are interpretations of time’s change
Like the lengthening shadows
Engaging the heat of the day

But once the night stars
Withdraw their spark into themselves
It is all over
Bar the wailing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kelly Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 1:40 AM
Time and language. Big subjects.
Tucker Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 10:10 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments. I really appreciate your engagement with this poem. I have been having a read of your verses and will post some responses soon. Peter
Diderot Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 5:56 PM
"Autogenic deification". fabulous choice of words. The whole poem is illuminating. Love it.
Tucker Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 2:33 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments. I really appreciate your engagement with this poem.
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