Things Are Amiss

In the world that we live in things are amiss.
We no longer welcome Gods heavenly bliss.
Through the swamps of sin we have swam,
not caring what awaits us as we near the end.
In his garden of beauty we could soar,
but this gift that awaits us we choose to ignore.
How long will he watch as we tear at his heart?
How long will his children tear him apart?
A path to his door he lays at our feet,
yet we turn our backs and choose to retreat.
The truth of what’s right is carved in our minds,
yet we choose to resist and live our lives blind.
Jesus knocks gently on our front door,
but we pretend to be sleeping until he knocks no more.
We go to our churches and give rise to his name,
then on the next day we cause someone pain.
Open thine eyes children of the Lord.
Fear not the evil of Satan’s hordes.
Lift up thine hands and praise the Lords name.
You will find that Love and our Savior is one in the same.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 5/13/2013 6:55:00 AM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 5/11/2013 10:14:00 PM
Hi Terry, I was sending out the mothers day message to all the poets who've been so kind through the years. Men and women alike.. he he he. By the way I knew that you are a guy. My son's name is *CHANCE TERRY.* <--- and he loves his name.. Sweet isn't it. :-) oh yes by the way... CONGRATULATIONS for the lovely win. Thank you for the nice and lovely poem you entered in my "Heaven Sent / Grace" contest. Take care of yourself and enjoy the blessings of today and tomorrow. LUV*LINDA
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Date: 3/9/2013 4:08:00 PM
Terry, i noticed your poems, are filled with good feeling..thank you for the praising poem..LINDA
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