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Thin Skinned

a small child crouches quiet eyes taken curious sight brow creases in question it a new thing these pink shapes on earthy brown face fingers backs of hands throat breasts half covered the same familiar patterned dress she child soft traces them on toes tops of feet calves where flame's flowers seared skin pink thin knees knelt down in plea in prayer kept brown strange new tattoos alien yet not unearthly she small prods lashless lids pats proud cheekbones insistent bows her head dark hair falls forward silk waterfalls stir shadows' flit over sleeping face eyes open wide fear drains colour then warm deep brown they glow for her knowingly Posted: 12-12-2018. NOTE: No to Xenophobia.

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Date: 1/12/2019 6:51:00 PM
Wow, an emotional poem, I love it and thank you for your comment :)
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Aqua Marine
Date: 1/17/2019 4:46:00 PM
Hi Maryann, thank you for your visit and comment too! I found your poetry's openness, and honesty, quite thought-provoking indeed! And written with compassion that shows deep understanding, both of yourself and others. Carry on writing- I like your style...(((HUGS ))) Warm regards, Aqua M.
Date: 12/15/2018 1:24:00 AM
This piece drew me in. An emotional poignant piece. Thanks for your kind visit.
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Date: 12/15/2018 1:44:00 AM
I deeply appreciate your visit and comment, Richard! I came across "Broken People" quite by chance earlier, and it resonates deeply...Take care, you have a thoughtful mind and heart... : ))
Date: 12/12/2018 1:09:00 PM
This is remarkably expressive - love 'where flames flowers/seared skin/pink thin' - makes the burn real! Excellent!
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Date: 12/12/2018 1:41:00 PM
A very welcome visit and comment from you, Michelle! I have a friend who was burnt in the xenophobic attacks here a couple of years ago. And he has these pink patches and burn scars. It is a tragedy that humans do this to each other. Thank you so much for your comment! (((HUGS)))

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