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thin ice

First day of spring 2024...March 19 at 11:06 P.M. following. 

thin ice in birdbath 
biting wind cuts to the bone....
sun's up first spring day

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Valsa George

January 25, 2025 at 10:20 PM

After winter, seeing the bright rays of the sun and welcoming the first day of spring is indeed a joy. Beautiful haiku.

Sara Kendrick

January 26, 2025 at 4:17 AM

Thank you, Valsa. We had a cold spring up to a point last year then it was hot. Your visit was delightful. Sara K

Bill Baker

March 22, 2024 at 5:28 PM

Yep, that ice is breaking up now. Yeah! Nice Haiku for spring, Sara. Hugs, Bill

Sara Kendrick

March 23, 2024 at 7:18 AM

Yes, it seems like spring is definitely here with its warmth and awakening. Your visits add such a special touch. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 22, 2024 at 10:36 AM

- Early spring ... winter is not quite gone, Sara :) - Have a great weekend :) -

Sara Kendrick

March 22, 2024 at 11:08 AM

It feels like winter is still here today, Anne-Lise. Damp, wet and cold. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Christina Bowring

March 22, 2024 at 8:26 AM

A great haiku dear Sara. Love the creative words you’ve artistically used here to describe a chilly scene. You’ve captured your first day of spring very poetically. We’ve had lots of rain of late but some sunny days as well :) Have a great weekend x

Sara Kendrick

March 22, 2024 at 11:07 AM

Thank you, Christina. Yes, spring came a little tad early something about leap year. LOL..Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

March 22, 2024 at 3:27 AM

We get sunshine but tepid warmth.

Sara Kendrick

March 22, 2024 at 5:27 AM

Victor, is the tepid warmth good or bad? Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

March 21, 2024 at 1:55 PM

I enjoyed reading this lovely "thin ice" Haiku write. Pretty Picture. I have found spring like to sleep in... Have blessed day writing away................

Sara Kendrick

March 22, 2024 at 5:16 AM

Why, thank you, Paula. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

March 21, 2024 at 8:06 AM

That is about it! I’m still cold…lol

Sara Kendrick

March 21, 2024 at 12:44 PM

Kim, it has warmed up this afternoon inside my home, but the computer thermometer says it is 47 degrees outside. I haven't been outside except to let the dog out and call her to stop rolling in something. LOL..Sara K

Vijay Pandit

March 21, 2024 at 6:03 AM

Much enjoyed this welcome to spring you wrote, Sara. Every line a splendid image.

Sara Kendrick

March 21, 2024 at 7:35 AM

Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Daniel Henry Rodgers

March 20, 2024 at 5:55 PM

Dear Sara, I love your wonderful Haiku. It is a beautiful reflection of the ending of Winter and the beginning of Spring. - Loved it, Sara! - Blessings, Daniel

Sara Kendrick

March 21, 2024 at 1:29 AM

Why, thank you, Daniel. Glad you loved it. Sara K

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