Thin

I stopped loving myself
when I invited the chaos back in;
that's why I don't know how
to love anyone 
anymore.
You can't love someone 
until you learn to love yourself.
That old cliche ********...but, 
isn't there some truth in it?
I've made homes out of other people, 
twisted my roots around until they withered to dust.
I have
nothing
to return to.
I have spread myself so 
thin,
given away the parts that 
made up my 
foundation.
I've given so much that whoever I've become
has 
nothing 
left
to give.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Tidd Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 9:09 AM
Codependent? Sounds like a poetic appeal by someone who knows they should give themselves a break, and also take back control.
Elizab Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 10:11 AM
Very good insight, Jim, and again, pretty accurate. Thanks for reading!
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