Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- Thick and Heavy -

The fog lies like a thick blanket over my city
                         It is gray, damp and heavy to breathe in
                         Grey and wet ..... gives me a headache
                     Morning turns to night, without any difference
                         I have to get the light and the sun back
                                 Neither cat or dog will go out
                                  I've heard about rain dance
                           Now I would like to take a sun dance
                              Will you join with me in my dance





09.01.2013
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Nette Onclaud June 3, 2013 at 1:37 PM oh, this one lifts my soul, anne..., such an uplifting verse... you took a wonderful theme and made your words sing!... well done!..:) huggs Anne-Lise Andresen June 3, 2013 at 2:34 PM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A February 14, 2013 at 8:24 PM Annalise, Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2013 at 1:55 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, LINDA. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Seth Shirey February 5, 2013 at 12:07 PM Coming from a Gothic standpoint, ide say that this is a really good poem! :) Since becoming more optimistic with myself this is the exact kind of poem I need in my day :D! Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2013 at 12:26 PM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Seth. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian February 1, 2013 at 1:58 PM How sweet, Anne Lise...I'd love to sun dance with you. I lived on the island of Cyprus where sun dancing was as easy as can be! You are a ray of sunshine to my soul. Thanks for your last post and encouragement! God bless! Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2013 at 2:04 PM .... we women have to stand together .... lol. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan January 19, 2013 at 8:57 PM I come from a place where the sun shines far too bright much of the time. Maybe we can trade? I really like the way you format most of your writing - centered and symmetrical. Being a visual person, the form, as well as the writing, has meaning for me. Keep up the good work! Jack Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2013 at 3:14 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

William J. Jr. Atfield January 17, 2013 at 1:07 PM Great write, you have captured the essence of a climate that surrounds us most of the time. Could it be that you are a British Colombian ?:( /:) Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2013 at 1:11 PM - (?) - Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments, William . - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan January 16, 2013 at 11:49 PM Hi Anne - Lise, how are you? Love the poem ;} have a blessed day xoxo's ;} Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2013 at 2:12 AM Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments, Debbie . - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley January 14, 2013 at 8:28 PM Oh,I'll be right there with ya! I hate those dark days that fade into night....oxox f.e.f. :o) Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2013 at 1:56 AM Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments, Dan. - -xoxo / / f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne January 14, 2013 at 10:12 AM what a lovely uplifting write - a sun dance : ) Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2013 at 10:32 AM Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments,Jack. - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Terry L. Allen January 13, 2013 at 2:21 PM A joyful dance should most shurely bring out the sun I'll join in. Huggs TLee Anne-Lise Andresen January 13, 2013 at 2:23 PM Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments,Terry. - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Reggae Magnet January 13, 2013 at 7:54 AM hi Anne, doesn't sound great but better days can only be ahead. the sun which shines within is still shining brightly I see. Anne-Lise Andresen January 13, 2013 at 9:33 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Robert. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux January 12, 2013 at 12:15 PM Someone must be dancing here, the sun is shining brightly today. Anne-Lise Andresen January 12, 2013 at 12:23 PM I was Bob. - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Richard. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Erich Goller January 12, 2013 at 11:33 AM Winter indeed ,not much fun for some. A very nice expressed poem,I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. Hugs!Erich Anne-Lise Andresen January 12, 2013 at 11:35 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Erich. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Isaiah Zerbst January 12, 2013 at 11:05 AM The story of winter. I like an occasional fog, but am always glad when spring hits. Many thanks for your kind comments. Anne-Lise Andresen January 12, 2013 at 11:15 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Isaiah. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sadaf Syed January 12, 2013 at 1:05 AM Thanks for your comments on my poetry Anne.. A great description of the weather and also that any weather in life can be made more cheerful if we do what we want to regardless of whatever circumstances:) Anne-Lise Andresen January 12, 2013 at 5:27 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sadaf. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi January 11, 2013 at 3:32 PM I enjoyed your write this evening. Light & Love Anne-Lise Andresen January 12, 2013 at 5:24 AM Thanks for your comments and your visit, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ann Roske January 11, 2013 at 1:09 PM My weather in Oregon State USA is a lot like yours this time of year... nice write Anne Lise Anne-Lise Andresen January 11, 2013 at 1:16 PM It gives me a headache...... Thank you for shining on my little poem, Ann. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun January 11, 2013 at 3:50 AM This is an awesome poem, so lovely one that I feel like joining you in the dance my dear friend Anne-Lise to get back the light and the sun back. Two thumbs up here! Thank you so much for sharing, for your visits, supports, inspirations and everything. Big sweet hugs for you! love always, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen January 11, 2013 at 7:02 AM Big hug back to you my friend Leonora, thank you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2013 at 6:51 PM this is a bright and cheerful poem at the end of it, for a grey foggy day!! Me likes! Anne-Lise Andresen January 11, 2013 at 2:04 AM Andrea, I is pleased when the sun shines and you're visiting my poem. - Thank you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick January 10, 2013 at 2:05 PM Continuous gray days can become heavy and depressing..Enjoyed your expression of this idea..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen January 11, 2013 at 2:02 AM Sara, I will be happy when the sun is shining and you're visiting my poem. - Thank you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Faleeha Hassan January 10, 2013 at 1:44 PM the Fog is must disappear and the sun must come Even we danceing under the sun Thanks to the beauty of the poem Anne-Lise Andresen January 11, 2013 at 2:01 AM will be glad when the sun is shining and you're Faleeha visiting my poem. - Thank you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joann Grisetti January 10, 2013 at 1:00 PM Put my name on your dance card - love to dance. Beautiful poem. Anne-Lise Andresen January 10, 2013 at 1:06 PM The more we are together ........ sun will come, Joann. - Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments. - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman January 10, 2013 at 12:37 PM Beautifully written piece... It obviously lays heavily on your heart, mind and soul. Anne-Lise Andresen January 10, 2013 at 12:44 PM Thanks for visiting appreciate your comments,Carol. - -xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell January 10, 2013 at 7:28 AM Lol, I sure will, Anne-Lise. It's about time we have a sun dance! It is gloomy and raining where I am at so I would love to see that sun just about now, lol. Oh well, I heard it will be in the 70's. So can't complain :). Cute write. Enjoyed! Anne-Lise Andresen January 10, 2013 at 9:58 AM Thank you for shining on my little poem, Toquyen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair January 10, 2013 at 6:20 AM A-L,Happy to join, my place is quite sunny these days!! Jag Anne-Lise Andresen January 10, 2013 at 6:21 AM Thank you for shining on my little poem, Jag. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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