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They'Re Killing Some Guy

Being Easter Sunday I thought I would post this poem again...….. It’s happening right now on the town square, I just came from there, It was a terrible sight to see, They’re nailing some guy to a tree. It looks like they beat him to death, The poor man can barely take a breath, They jammed a crown of thorns on his head, It looks like he is almost dead. He claims to be the King of the Jews, Have you heard his radical views? He says we do not have to die, How can this be true? It must be a lie. They said Pilate tried to set him free, But the high priest would not let that be, So Pilate washed his hands of this mess, Because he found no wrongs confessed. There are two others with him on the hill, All three they plan to kill, The two criminals I understand why, But this Rabbi should not have to die. Most of his friends cannot be found, Someone said they must have fled town, His Mother and a few are at his feet, They followed him up the bloody street. There is a sign nailed above his head, “King of the Jews” is what it read, The Messiah is what you claim to be, Save yourself, come down, set your self free. A soldier said his final time has come, He is asking God to forgive everyone, He said “God why have you forsaken me?” Looking towards Heaven as if to see. Guards are throwing dice for his clothes, There is no pity for him God knows, Struggling to speak, “It is finished” he said, He finally laid down his head. The day turned to night; the ground began to shake, Graves are opening, the dead are awake, People are afraid and running around, They pierced his side and pulled him down. Shouts in the temple, the curtain is torn in two, The elders and priests now know what is true, Just as I heard the centurion say, “This truly was a Holy man we killed today.

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Date: 5/4/2020 12:10:00 AM
Love this one, Timothy. Awesome storytelling skills. Bravo. A FAVE for me.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/4/2022 12:33:00 AM
A very late thank you!
Date: 4/17/2020 6:09:00 PM
Hello Timothy … a time of cruelty and the awakening that God will comfort the souls. Jesus proved that and God resurrected him to education the downtrodden masses. Enjoyed this verse of yours Timothy - Lindsay
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 4/17/2020 6:42:00 PM
Thanks Lindsay, the resurrection is proof of Christ. Why would the apostles give their lives and suffer torture for years after witnessing a horrible crucifixion if the resurrection did not happen. God Bless you and yours.
Date: 4/16/2020 2:45:00 PM
Thankfully His tomb is empty. This is a great retelling of the most significant event to ever take place. Well expressed Timothy.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 4/16/2020 10:03:00 PM
Thanks Richard. What could make the Apostles go preach until their deaths other than the resurrection of Christ?
Date: 4/12/2020 8:39:00 PM
Brilliantly done Timothy, very appropriate for today. Happy Easter. Stay safe. Tom
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 4/12/2020 8:52:00 PM
Thanks Tom. I offer an Easter prayer that you and yours are well and safe.

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