They Left Me

Whispers and laughter fill the room
Glares that speak to the spirit
They left me in the coldest night
All alone
With no one to help or to hold
They'll throw things
And spit in my face
Shouting insults
"You're worthless"
"You're a disgrace"
"I look at you in disgust"
My world is slowly crumbling
The walls closing in
Is there a way out
They left me feeling dark and lonely
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 6/30/2015 11:12:00 PM
Hannah, Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 6/29/2015 8:52:00 PM
Just back to say well done on your placing in the contest, Hannah. Viv x
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Date: 6/24/2015 4:09:00 AM
- Hello Hannah :) - I would be delighted to welcome you to P- Soup - Hope you will enjoy being here with us :) - Share your thoughts and words - Good luck with your writing :) - A quick greeting from Norway // Anne -Lise :)
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Date: 6/24/2015 1:29:00 AM
Hannah, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/24/2015 12:39:00 AM
This is deep Hannah, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/23/2015 10:31:00 PM
A bleak but great first submission, Hannah. But take heart- I'm sure that you'll rise like a Phoenix. Welcome to Poetry Soup, with it's bunch of like-minded wordsmiths. I'm sure that you'll find much joy and comfort reading and sharing on this site. Enjoy, and be happy. Viv x
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