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They Forgot To Be

The little girl asked 'Do you love me?" "Yes," they replied, "now leave us alone!" The little girl said "You love her more!" "Now don't be silly, I'm quite busy. Your father's business burned down today, we have no time for this." The little girl ran, she was found and dismissed as additional stress. It passed along as days that were not meant to be. It continued as coldness that never ends. And then one day,they grew older, and the little girl came to realize the truth, that family would never be hers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/27/2011 3:28:00 PM
Very didactic
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:11:00 AM
Very nice but sad at the same time...Jimmy
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Date: 4/26/2011 4:06:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Gloria. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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