Notes About The Poem

They Drift By


            Our seconds- they drift by each day-
                 like little pieces fly,
                       and where they fall and where they lay
                           can make us laugh or cry.

                           Of all the little pieces, some
                      together, shape a form
                 on how our life will grow, become-
            or vanish in its storm.

            Our little pieces build up time-
                 from seconds grow to years;
                      so many- but they all entwine
                            to bring us smiles or tears.

                           And all our little pieces hold
                      the memories we keep;
                 like through an hourglass they unfold
            our lifetime, in a heap.

            Our little pieces we must use
                 to never waste a one,
                      for as they fly, so quick diffuse-
                           can never be redone.

                           Our seconds- they drift by each day-
                      as little pieces fly.
                 Each one shapes up our life's pathway-
            from birth until we die.


September 15, 2016

~3rd Place~
Contest: Brian's Select 4
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 06/05/2020

~3rd Place~
Contest: All The Little Pieces
Sponsor: Constance LaFrance
Judged: -9/22/2016
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Merryman Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 4:34 PM
A beautiful write, Sandra! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Haight Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 8:18 PM
Thank you so much, Kim! Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 10:12 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing poem, so beautifully penned ~
Haight Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 8:18 PM
Thank you, Broken Wings, for another very inspiring contest. I enjoyed writing my poem for your theme, and I so much appreciate my fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
Rowe Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 7:11 PM
WOW to this line alone: on how a life can grow, become, or vanish in its storm. Such an uplifting and cautionary message to use the time we're given wisely. A 7.
Haight Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Thank you very much, Jesse, for your nice visit and supportive comments, congrats and rating! Much appreciated. Sandra
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September 22, 2016 at 5:11 PM
Beautiful message and beautiful poem, Sandra. Congrats on a well deserved win! Agnes
Haight Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Thank you again, Agnes, for all your lovely comments and support. I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Muideen Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 5:06 PM
I don't doubt it, this great gem will win the contest. You penned it very well and meaningful.........A.M.
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Thank you so much, Afolabi, for your vote of confidence and supportive comments! Sandra
Kalicharan Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 4:15 PM
This is by far THE BEST poem I've read so far on this site. It was indeed a pleasure reading this. You definitely have a new fan!! Jenni_K
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 8:06 PM
Thank you so much, Jenni, for your visit and very supportive comments! I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 3:06 PM
Sandra, your poem is so outstanding in form and content. I loved this beautiful piece! It shines a bright spotlight on your talent my friend! ; ) 7
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 8:05 PM
Thank you, dear Connie, once again for your continued visits and wonderful support. I appreciate you kindness! Hugs, Sandra
Arnone Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 2:28 PM
I might be able to write a decent poem or story; but you, Sandra, have a magical, delicate way with words and rhyme that is beyond reproach. A beautiful, timely Quatrain. :-)
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 8:04 PM
Tom, I appreciate your stopping by with such encouraging and complimentary comments! Very uplifting, and I thank you so much. Sandra
Turner Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 8:07 AM
Mrs Sandra, it is truly a a pleasure to read your poems. I enjoyed this one immensely:)
Haight Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 7:54 PM
Thank you so much, Daniel. I am very pleased that you enjoyed it! Sandra
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