They Closed the Brothel

O brother, they closed the brothel!
Beer and barmaid breath is closed.
Banter with corsets and silk stockings
withheld - the downy frown of ‘stache.
The itch of a cattle drive — the rawhide
chaffed and fettered, 
all the while driven by unholy sex.
O brother, a frightful fight broke out
like measles planted from head to toe.
when you fantasized her soft skin,
her tongue lash —all those miles and miles -
the special one you call Maisy, 
but boards like bandaids hammered
into place. No neon sign to contemplate.
You bring yourself back home, poor soul,
to your hot and bothered bride. There
you find the ride you’d forgotten.
You smile surprised. Only problem is
she makes you bathe and shave,
won’t allow you that chew or that beer.
O brother, they closed the brothel!

2/23/2021
Contest: They Closed the Brothel
Sponsor: Kai Neumann
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ellis Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 6:35 PM
This is an amazing poem. If you didn't win the contest I shall protest. The poet gathers all her details like a recipe, puts them in a mixing bowl, adds love & purpose and serves us gourmet poetry. And I am glad I stopped at the buffet. Very relevant story line as well. So much for that brothel...Perhaps a few marriages will last a few days longer LOL.
Calasibetta Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 11:58 AM
HI KIm, What a fun read! Paulette
Rodrigues Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 12:51 PM
Thanks, Paulette!
Proxenos Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 9:53 AM
Kim, a real live cowboy brothel - the creativity and unique approach puts us right in the middle of this hyped up brothel. Wonderful poetry. Good luck in the contest my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 1:49 PM
Thank you!
Gentile Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 8:08 AM
Sounds like an episode of Gunsmoke to me Kim. I loved it, well done!!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 2:58 PM
LOL!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 10:53 PM
Wonder what Maisy is doing these days :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 6:08 AM
LOL...
Seeker Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 6:28 PM
Our smile widens, ear to ear! Beautifully penned, Kim! Sure shot winner!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 6:08 AM
Thank you, my friend! :)
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