They Came For Us - Act 2

Weeks have passed, since they were last here
We have lost so many, many still in trance like fears
The ones who escaped this terrible time
Are the mute and the deaf, or underground like the mines
 
We are left at a loss as to when they return
What can we do, no military to yearn
We witnessed many shuttles and spaceships en masse
Our population in demise no matter the class
 
The ones who are able to the surface they go
Bringing back water and supplies, viewing a city in woe
We could never imagine the quietness of it all
But we sense their return in numbing pall
 
We awake early morning to the sounds of lashing rain
For we know they are here to pillage once again
The unlucky ones to the shuttles they go
We can only protect so many, keep them safe down below
 
Their visits continued for many many years
Millions were taken, but we got used to our fears
We still walk the streets, of our deserted cities and towns
Its so surreal and unimaginable, when there is no one around

 



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Sweetheart Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 2:21 PM
Sci Fi Heaven to read... almost like the Twilight Zone... remember that?.. this is something to think about.. could it really happen?.. and if so... how could we ever prepare?? great intense write James... u really need to do a novel my friend... luv.. Linda-Marie..
Bono Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 9:09 AM
Just wanted to stop by and say good morning and hope you have a great day.
Anymore Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 6:06 PM
Hey James, how's it going? This is an interesting story (darkly I think, this solves the population problem!) I feel it would flow better though if you developed a pattern or sense of your syllables. Give it a meter you know?
Delacroix Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 4:59 PM
Yes, it would be very surreal and so awful to live in fear all the time. But what if there intention is to save us from certain doom? See, now my imagination's going to work. :) Thanks for sharing a dramatic fantasy. Best wishes always, Caroline.
Devonshire Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 2:07 PM
OK, so where's "Act 3"? Don't leave us hanging, James, please!!! Guess we're all hoping for a happy ending, but perhaps you intended to leave it right where it is. Kind of like a Twilight Zone ending, right? But we want more! Much love, Carolyn
La France Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 12:53 PM
Well there better be a chapter 3.. because this is just getting good... a great idea for a book, dear heart, I like your imagination...... and thanks for your comment on my poetry..
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 9:14 AM
WEll, dang it, I thought I was going to be seeing the ending here. haha. I hope to see the conclusion you have in store for us. It is a good story, James (btw, my entry will be the plump guy, not the dieting lyrics) thanks for your comment on them. LUv, andrea
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