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They Call You a Horse

They call you a horse, 
  But you live in the sea,
You can't gallop or run,
  Or have any fun.

You don't like to eat hay,
  And you never go 'Neigh.'
Perhaps you're a little hoarse,
  --A little sea horse, of course!

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Michelle Faulkner Date: 4/13/2018 2:11:00 PM I love sea horses - I have a necklace of one! This was adorable- Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 4/13/2018 2:39:00 PM Really? A necklace of sea horses?! That's a new one for me! ...This one seemed to hit the spot with a lot poetry soup-ers. Thanks for weighing in on it. :) gw

Maria Williams Date: 2/16/2018 12:41:00 AM Oh of course, your poem is as cute as a little sweet sea horse....Maria Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 2/16/2018 1:26:00 AM Thank you, Maria. You've opened my eyes to something. Amazingly enough, I hadn't considered that a sea horse could be viewed as 'cute.' Blessings, gw

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/13/2018 4:16:00 AM - Congratulations on this funny poem, Gershon :) - // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 2/13/2018 8:06:00 PM Thanks, Anne-Li/Sunshine. Keep smiling! Best wishes, Gershon

Lewis Raynes Date: 2/12/2018 6:44:00 PM nice, congratulations Gershon on a well deserved first place Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 2/12/2018 7:19:00 PM Thank you, Lewis!

Gary Smith Date: 2/12/2018 6:20:00 PM Congrats Gershon :) Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 2/12/2018 6:28:00 PM Thank you so much. I am humbled, grateful---and glad you liked it, all of these at once...I actually had a couple of 7-year olds critique it, and they liked it too. Thank you for sponsoring the contest...Now it's my turn to (ante up $40 bucks, join the Soup, and) sponsor a contest or two myself! Best wishes, gw

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/12/2018 6:00:00 PM Very cute, Gershon! Congrats! Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 2/12/2018 6:29:00 PM Thank you, Kim! Thanks for reading it and for your kind words. Best wishes, Gershon

Jan Allison Date: 2/12/2018 5:52:00 PM Many congrats Gershon:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 2/12/2018 6:30:00 PM And hugs right back, Jan! Hope those sea horses are staying warm this winter!! Best wishes, Gershon

Line Gauthier Date: 2/12/2018 5:16:00 PM Well - right back at your with well deserved congrats on your solid 1st lace finish!! Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 2/12/2018 6:31:00 PM Thank you, Line! Here's to a first place finish for you in the next contest you enter. You're the best support system I think I've ever had. Thank you, Thank you, my friend.

Line Gauthier Date: 2/12/2018 8:02:00 AM Cute, Gershon. The kids would love this rhyme. Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 2/12/2018 1:04:00 PM Thank you. I'm hoping it'll place in the "Poem for 7 Year Olds" Contest. We'll see...

Jan Allison Date: 2/1/2018 5:40:00 AM what a fun write good luck in the contest Gershon:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 2/1/2018 11:37:00 PM Thank you so much for reading the poem, and for your encouraging words!...Now I've got to test this one on some seven-year olds...Best of everything, Gershon