These Thoughts of You

My beloved... Continious are these thoughts of you Like undying winds and endless seas Eternal gardens are my nights between half moons ,still stars and skies Sleepless are my dreams In dreams I travel far to a distant land In dreams I take you to my world,I let you hold my hand The land of Oz I give to you,your spirit I'll excite This fairyland of rainbow hues,I share it too This fertile land that exists only in my mind I kiss away the joyless rain ,and bring to you the sun In fields of evergreen We'd lay,On milky sands barefoot we run We'll ride the tide,and live oncemore the forgotten presence of yesterdays We recall moments of hearts once young Of sweet songs played by nightingales.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 5/28/2015 11:02:00 PM
Very nice...Beautiful words...Sweet rhythms...Love for love....Best wishes to you dear...
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Date: 4/14/2015 1:48:00 AM
To share one's wilderness of playful wishes that roam our fields of innocent affection is such sweet happiness Charma. "I kiss away the joyless rain, and bring to you the sun..." A gift of priceless friendship...J.A.B.
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Date: 4/13/2015 11:37:00 AM
So nice to read your verse this morning, I wish I had heard a nightingale, I never have [sigh]. Keep up the good work. Light & love
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Date: 4/12/2015 1:36:00 PM
Dear Charma, You have always taken me to new and better worlds in your poetry. When I feel down, you inspire me and fill my heart with cheer. Bless you, dear, for being who you are! Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 4/12/2015 1:54:00 AM
A beautiful and dreamy poem Charma, you write in such a way it's breathtaking and amazing... Love Linda
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Date: 4/11/2015 3:27:00 AM
Excellent poem Charmaine. #7
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Date: 4/10/2015 11:43:00 PM
Where are the woman who think this way? Oh where do they hide? Loved this Charma
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Date: 4/10/2015 9:51:00 AM
Magnificent!
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Date: 4/9/2015 5:35:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..Very passionate..Sara
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Date: 4/9/2015 2:19:00 AM
ohh, a dreamy wonder where love and reveries glow... beautifully crafted, charms!.. huggs
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Date: 4/8/2015 4:32:00 PM
You are one of a kind, my dearest Charmaine! This was absolutely the sweetest, most gorgeous tale that only you are capable of! This is the reason your poetry stands alone my dearest friend! I bow to your talents and gracious manner with which you display your tender heart! Love, Jack xxx
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Date: 4/8/2015 2:05:00 PM
This is rather beautiful and heartfelt.
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Date: 4/8/2015 6:26:00 AM
Another Beautiful Poem from you Charma, A really fascinating Piece I might find my way home yet!! God Bless Kevin
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Date: 4/7/2015 5:59:00 PM
The words seemed to flow effortlessly and the imagery created an atmosphere of tender feelings laced with affection and sexuality. Emile.
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Date: 4/7/2015 5:15:00 PM
WOW, Wonderful It captured my heart
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Date: 4/7/2015 3:43:00 PM
beautifully penned Charma:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2015 2:51:00 PM
Your love for your beloved is palpable, Charmaine. Beautiful write.
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Date: 4/7/2015 1:42:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and flow ((sighs)) Going to faves. ~Jan
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Date: 4/7/2015 1:41:00 PM
In fields of evergreen we'd lay...suited perfect for eternity....birdbirdbird the sweet song of the nightingales...beautiful a fav our ite.....hugs Tim
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Date: 4/7/2015 1:26:00 PM
Beautiful! A 7!
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