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These Thoughts of You

My beloved... Continious are these thoughts of you Like undying winds and endless seas Eternal gardens are my nights between half moons ,still stars and skies Sleepless are my dreams In dreams I travel far to a distant land In dreams I take you to my world,I let you hold my hand The land of Oz I give to you,your spirit I'll excite This fairyland of rainbow hues,I share it too This fertile land that exists only in my mind I kiss away the joyless rain ,and bring to you the sun In fields of evergreen We'd lay,On milky sands barefoot we run We'll ride the tide,and live oncemore the forgotten presence of yesterdays We recall moments of hearts once young Of sweet songs played by nightingales.

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Sandip Goswami

Date: 5/28/2015 11:02:00 PM

Very nice...Beautiful words...Sweet rhythms...Love for love....Best wishes to you dear...

Justin Bordner

Date: 4/14/2015 1:48:00 AM

To share one's wilderness of playful wishes that roam our fields of innocent affection is such sweet happiness Charma. "I kiss away the joyless rain, and bring to you the sun..." A gift of priceless friendship...J.A.B.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/13/2015 11:37:00 AM

So nice to read your verse this morning, I wish I had heard a nightingale, I never have [sigh]. Keep up the good work. Light & love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/12/2015 1:36:00 PM

Dear Charma, You have always taken me to new and better worlds in your poetry. When I feel down, you inspire me and fill my heart with cheer. Bless you, dear, for being who you are! Love you, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2015 1:54:00 AM

A beautiful and dreamy poem Charma, you write in such a way it's breathtaking and amazing... Love Linda

Deborah Turner

Date: 4/11/2015 3:27:00 AM

Excellent poem Charmaine. #7

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/10/2015 11:43:00 PM

Where are the woman who think this way? Oh where do they hide? Loved this Charma

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/10/2015 9:51:00 AM

Magnificent!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/9/2015 5:35:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work..Very passionate..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/9/2015 2:19:00 AM

ohh, a dreamy wonder where love and reveries glow... beautifully crafted, charms!.. huggs

Jack Ellison

Date: 4/8/2015 4:32:00 PM

You are one of a kind, my dearest Charmaine! This was absolutely the sweetest, most gorgeous tale that only you are capable of! This is the reason your poetry stands alone my dearest friend! I bow to your talents and gracious manner with which you display your tender heart! Love, Jack xxx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/8/2015 2:05:00 PM

This is rather beautiful and heartfelt.

Kevin Leake

Date: 4/8/2015 6:26:00 AM

Another Beautiful Poem from you Charma, A really fascinating Piece I might find my way home yet!! God Bless Kevin

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/7/2015 5:59:00 PM

The words seemed to flow effortlessly and the imagery created an atmosphere of tender feelings laced with affection and sexuality. Emile.

Milton Robertson

Date: 4/7/2015 5:15:00 PM

WOW, Wonderful It captured my heart

Jan Allison

Date: 4/7/2015 3:43:00 PM

beautifully penned Charma:-) Hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/7/2015 2:51:00 PM

Your love for your beloved is palpable, Charmaine. Beautiful write.

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 4/7/2015 1:42:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and flow ((sighs)) Going to faves. ~Jan

Tim Smith

Date: 4/7/2015 1:41:00 PM

In fields of evergreen we'd lay...suited perfect for eternity....birdbirdbird the sweet song of the nightingales...beautiful a fav our ite.....hugs Tim

Anna Hopper

Date: 4/7/2015 1:26:00 PM

Beautiful! A 7!