Charmaine Chircop Poet Free verse

These Thoughts of You

My beloved...

Continious are these thoughts of you

Like undying winds and endless seas

Eternal gardens are my nights

between half moons ,still stars and skies

Sleepless are my dreams

In dreams I travel far to a distant land

In dreams I take you to my world,I let you hold my hand

The  land of Oz I give to you,your spirit I'll excite

This fairyland of rainbow hues,I share it too

This fertile land that exists only in my mind

I kiss away the joyless rain ,and bring to you the sun

In fields of evergreen We'd lay,On milky sands barefoot we run

We'll ride the tide,and live oncemore

the forgotten presence of yesterdays

We recall  moments of hearts once young

Of sweet songs played by nightingales.

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Sandip Goswami May 28, 2015 at 11:02 PM Very nice...Beautiful words...Sweet rhythms...Love for love....Best wishes to you dear...

Justin Bordner April 14, 2015 at 1:48 AM To share one's wilderness of playful wishes that roam our fields of innocent affection is such sweet happiness Charma. "I kiss away the joyless rain, and bring to you the sun..." A gift of priceless friendship...J.A.B.

Debbie Guzzi April 13, 2015 at 11:37 AM So nice to read your verse this morning, I wish I had heard a nightingale, I never have [sigh]. Keep up the good work. Light & love

Carolyn Devonshire April 12, 2015 at 1:36 PM Dear Charma, You have always taken me to new and better worlds in your poetry. When I feel down, you inspire me and fill my heart with cheer. Bless you, dear, for being who you are! Love you, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A April 12, 2015 at 1:54 AM A beautiful and dreamy poem Charma, you write in such a way it's breathtaking and amazing... Love Linda

Deborah Turner April 11, 2015 at 3:27 AM Excellent poem Charmaine. #7

Arthur Vaso April 10, 2015 at 11:43 PM Where are the woman who think this way? Oh where do they hide? Loved this Charma

Richard Lamoureux April 10, 2015 at 9:51 AM Magnificent!

Sara Kendrick April 9, 2015 at 5:35 AM Enjoyed reading your work..Very passionate..Sara

Nette Onclaud April 9, 2015 at 2:19 AM ohh, a dreamy wonder where love and reveries glow... beautifully crafted, charms!.. huggs

Jack Ellison April 8, 2015 at 4:32 PM You are one of a kind, my dearest Charmaine! This was absolutely the sweetest, most gorgeous tale that only you are capable of! This is the reason your poetry stands alone my dearest friend! I bow to your talents and gracious manner with which you display your tender heart! Love, Jack xxx

M. L. Kiser April 8, 2015 at 2:05 PM This is rather beautiful and heartfelt.

Kevin Leake April 8, 2015 at 6:26 AM Another Beautiful Poem from you Charma, A really fascinating Piece I might find my way home yet!! God Bless Kevin

Emile Pinet April 7, 2015 at 5:59 PM The words seemed to flow effortlessly and the imagery created an atmosphere of tender feelings laced with affection and sexuality. Emile.

Milton Robertson April 7, 2015 at 5:15 PM WOW, Wonderful It captured my heart

Jan Allison April 7, 2015 at 3:43 PM beautifully penned Charma:-) Hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian April 7, 2015 at 2:51 PM Your love for your beloved is palpable, Charmaine. Beautiful write.

Jaycee Cervenka April 7, 2015 at 1:42 PM Beautiful imagery and flow ((sighs)) Going to faves. ~Jan

Tim Smith April 7, 2015 at 1:41 PM In fields of evergreen we'd lay...suited perfect for eternity....birdbirdbird the sweet song of the nightingales...beautiful a fav our ite.....hugs Tim

Anna Hopper April 7, 2015 at 1:26 PM Beautiful! A 7!