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These Seven Things I Hold Dear

Sixteen minutes is all I had to grab what I hold dear, now seven things left is all I have to always keep near. That set of six scrapbooks was the first I saved with pride, for they hold pictures of my Ella Rose growing up inside. Man, were they heavy since memories flooded every page, but I held the strength to always keep them by my side. I would hate to not continue them as she begins to age. Three things of Karen’s I needed from her long ago past. First her leather cross bracelet she wore when she passed. Then I made sure I grabbed that poem we wrote to me, for I can’t imagine not seeing something so surpassed. No, I could not forget her old torn and worn brown hoodie. I ran upstairs to see what I could rescue from the fire, I saw Ella’s pink bunny she sleeps with out of girly desire. When she was born I gave it to her as I cried so elated. I knew that bunny would be more important than any attire, to her it was the greatest thing that was ever created. Two things from Nick I had to get before it was too late. One, a picture in high school of us on a special date. Then that poem he wrote me when I was down and blue, I memorized it but I needed it, for it represents our fate. Without those two things I don’t know what I’d do. These seven things I rescued from a terrible fire in my home, but with them still in my life I know I shan’t ever be alone. Seven Things You Would Save If Your House Was On Fire Poetry Contest February 23, 2019

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Date: 2/28/2019 12:32:00 AM
Dear Lu Loo, I hope this never happens to you. A heartfelt poem. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/27/2019 11:35:00 AM
An emotion packed tender rendering Lu Loo, just wonderful. Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Date: 2/23/2019 4:38:00 PM
G'day Lu … read your two latest posts and thoroughly enjoyed both of them. The most thing to save of course is to save yourself - thanks Lu - Lindsay
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