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These Not Unbroken

After all those years, I do not expect to find the gate unbroken. It will be, and will be ajar. I'll go through it to the house abandoned, a sullen house, a wrecked out car. All things will be a trial, so broken, the summing up of me, too: b r o k e n . 9/9/2017

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Date: 9/24/2017 10:26:00 AM
Time takes its toll on us, and that refers not only to what is physical. Congratulations, Laura, on having this expressive poem on the winners' list. Regards // paul
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Date: 9/24/2017 2:51:00 AM
congratulations Laura , its very strange I commented on your poem a few days ago but the comment has disappeared! :-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 9/23/2017 2:04:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Laura :)
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Date: 9/23/2017 9:21:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my contest, well d o n e !
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