Notes About The Poem

If there is one picture that captures the soul of the land through which, I've had the privilege of paddling it is Tom Thompson's The West Wind

 

These Lakes

These  lakes are scratches 
gouged by glaciers
from rocks new 
when life began.

Life is hard here 
soil  thin, fire common
yet Thompson's West Wind
is but a paddle ahead.

Blood flows thickly
o’er flesh		
to knit a healing scab
leaving just a faint scar.

Stir not
these calm waters
nor linger 
o’er faint lines.

Paddle lightly
to the sunset
sending ripples
to the dawn.

May 19, 2014  - The Perfect Painting
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Rios Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 9:40 AM
Good imagery
Rodgers Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 12:49 PM
Thanks
Vaso Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 9:41 PM
I quite enjoyed this poem!!!!
Rodgers Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 7:24 AM
Thanks for your comment, glad you enjoyed
Guzzi Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 9:05 AM
Really, really like verse 3! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Rodgers Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 9:33 PM
Thanks Debbie, good to know you appreciated my transiiton from landscape to personal.
A   Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 8:48 PM
thank you for the reply... Linda
Devonshire Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 3:49 PM
Thank you for introducing us to "Thompson's West Wind," Aberfoyle, and congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
Rodgers Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 8:42 PM
Thanks Carolyn, Thompson is an icon in Canada and echos of his vision make up our landscape.
A   Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 3:27 PM
A Dave,, Congratulations....... Love your perfect painting, poem. Every poem on Elly's list has amazing imagery. Love <3 LINDA
Rodgers Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 8:37 PM
Thanks Linda, itis most interesting to see how many takes there were on this theme
A  Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 2:39 PM
Aberfoyle, :) Congratulations, awesome picture painting, poem. ~SKAT~
Rodgers Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 8:35 PM
Thanks Skat
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 1:10 PM
this exemplifies it.. painting in a poetry.. :) wow!!! Congratulations!!! GBU=====Olive Eloisa
Rodgers Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 8:25 PM
Thanks Olive
Sietesantos Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 12:57 PM
Beautiful write - congratulations on a well-deserved win!
Rodgers Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 8:13 PM
Thanks Pandita
Roberts Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 12:01 PM
congratulation on a verse well written ......Seren
Rodgers Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 7:55 PM
Thanks Seren
Thajudeen Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 10:40 AM
Painting good.
Rodgers Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 11:00 AM
Thanks Muhamma
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