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If there is one picture that captures the soul of the land through which, I've had the privilege of paddling it is Tom Thompson's The West Wind

 

These  lakes are scratches 
gouged by glaciers
from rocks new 
when life began.

Life is hard here 
soil  thin, fire common
yet Thompson's West Wind
is but a paddle ahead.

Blood flows thickly
o’er flesh		
to knit a healing scab
leaving just a faint scar.

Stir not
these calm waters
nor linger 
o’er faint lines.

Paddle lightly
to the sunset
sending ripples
to the dawn.

May 19, 2014  - The Perfect Painting
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/8/2016 9:40:00 AM
Good imagery
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 4/8/2016 12:49:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 6/19/2014 9:41:00 PM
I quite enjoyed this poem!!!!
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 6/20/2014 7:24:00 AM
Thanks for your comment, glad you enjoyed
Date: 6/12/2014 9:05:00 AM
Really, really like verse 3! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 6/15/2014 9:33:00 PM
Thanks Debbie, good to know you appreciated my transiiton from landscape to personal.
Date: 6/10/2014 8:48:00 PM
thank you for the reply... Linda
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Date: 6/10/2014 3:49:00 PM
Thank you for introducing us to "Thompson's West Wind," Aberfoyle, and congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 6/10/2014 8:42:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn, Thompson is an icon in Canada and echos of his vision make up our landscape.
Date: 6/10/2014 3:27:00 PM
A Dave,, Congratulations....... Love your perfect painting, poem. Every poem on Elly's list has amazing imagery. Love <3 LINDA
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 6/10/2014 8:37:00 PM
Thanks Linda, itis most interesting to see how many takes there were on this theme
Date: 6/10/2014 2:39:00 PM
Aberfoyle, :) Congratulations, awesome picture painting, poem. ~SKAT~
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 6/10/2014 8:35:00 PM
Thanks Skat
Date: 6/10/2014 1:10:00 PM
this exemplifies it.. painting in a poetry.. :) wow!!! Congratulations!!! GBU=====Olive Eloisa
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 6/10/2014 8:25:00 PM
Thanks Olive
Date: 6/10/2014 12:57:00 PM
Beautiful write - congratulations on a well-deserved win!
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 6/10/2014 8:13:00 PM
Thanks Pandita
Date: 6/10/2014 12:01:00 PM
congratulation on a verse well written ......Seren
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 6/10/2014 7:55:00 PM
Thanks Seren
Date: 5/19/2014 10:40:00 AM
Painting good.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 5/19/2014 11:00:00 AM
Thanks Muhamma
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