These Days

I breathe you in
The smell of your hair
The taste of you skin.

The promise of your body
The you that is part me
Laid out on sheets

Whiter than your skin.
Spread out across hope
Bluer than the sky

These things never leave me
They haunt me these days
When you are gone

As I watch you drift 

The constant ache of absence
Relieved when I see you again

In spite the No Man's Land 
That lays between us,

Probably, I'll close my eyes 
And try to cross again

But, these days

I go about my business
I say my prayers

Eat when I'm hungry
Sleep when I'm tired

And am duly cut in two
One half here, walking around

The other

Laid out on sheets,

Shorn thin

Spread out across hope

That is as blue 

As your eyes 

And

as

Warm as your skin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/25/2016 12:55:00 AM
Alexander, enjoyed reading your poem today. ,Thank you for sharing your words. Hope to see you post again.... *SKAT*
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Date: 2/26/2016 3:08:00 PM
Alexander,, Welcome to Poetry soup I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Other than that I will read, enjoy and comment with positive feedback. Remember, keep posting, stay in touch, TAP my shoulder when you have a new poem. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. You might find my support addictive. I've been a SOUP Poet for 6 years. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. I'm from Texas, How about you? Tell me a little about your poetic skills. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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