These Bare Walls

On these bare walls 
there once hung
artwork that was picked by you,
which you'd then picked over,
leaving only a needlepoint 
your mother made for our wedding 
and a picture an alcoholic friend gave you
of a bear

How ironic now, 
it seems, they're not so bare
since I've hung a painting of
dancing bears on the bare wall where 
I took down the needlepoint
and a butterfly, 
in the bare spot you left
by the front door
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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October 27, 2014 at 8:42 AM
I give it a seven, David. Very well composed poem. Good imagery, and a great expression of an experience all too common in today's world of accepted lack of commitment.
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2014 at 10:23 PM
Thank you for the kind words Cona, I look forward to reading your work as well
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September 6, 2014 at 11:24 AM
David -dancing bears and butterflies: I think joy, happiness, light heartedness, freedom and transformation-lovely and simply put. :-) Christine
Brown Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 11:48 AM
Thank you Christine :)
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August 30, 2014 at 4:56 AM
Beautiful and sad....Lovely David. That ending...the butterfly signifying her departure. Thank you for sharing this.
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 1:25 PM
Thank you Eileen...yes, the butterfly signifies so much
Human Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 11:37 PM
I enjoyed this. Nice combination of sad and funny. Kindly, Daniel.
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 1:00 AM
Thank you Daniel, I look forward to reading some of your work
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