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These Are the Times

On the edge of a shower beneath gray skies, All the leaves are still with a sense of calmness On this summer day, cooled down after the heat The flowers wait for a drink, as birds chirp in the woods If only everyone could capture this moment Not a worry amidst nature’s granted peace These are the times to capture while they last These are the times to seek all to fill the soul Like pieces of a puzzle, completing life with fulfillment Only found in this bountiful creation granted to us Years of pieces, moments consolidated in memories These are the times Heidi Sands 7/1/21 Placed with one of the 1st placements. July 2 Poetry Contest

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 7/2/2021 11:29:00 AM

Hello Heidi, What better meaning on the edge of a cloud. All these moments before it rains. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/2/2021 11:42:00 AM

Yes, on the edge of a cloud would be nice too. Thank you Richard :)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 7/2/2021 11:13:00 AM

Beautifully depicted the nature's beauty... Thoroughly enjoyed reading it...

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/2/2021 11:22:00 AM

Thank you Supraja. I am happy you enjoyed it. :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/2/2021 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Heidi. You have perfectly captured that quiet before a rainstorm. Have marveled at that stillness many times. Love your creative expressions "on the edge of a shower," "flowers wait for a drink." And yes creation is a gift just like these lines. Blessings to you!

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/2/2021 10:14:00 AM

Thank you very much Sam. I appreciate the kind comment and feedback :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/2/2021 8:04:00 AM

A lovely poem. Congratulations!

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/2/2021 10:14:00 AM

Thank you very much :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/2/2021 4:59:00 AM

This is a lovely poem, Heidi, with imagery and feelings. I enjoyed the read.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/2/2021 6:57:00 AM

I am happy you enjoyed it. Thank you Vijay. I hope you have a nice day :)

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/2/2021 4:28:00 AM

"Years of pieces, moments consolidated in memories" If only we watched nature more often and collected many memories. Nature is beauty and bliss. Wonderful write, great images, a delight to read. Thanks for sharing

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/2/2021 6:59:00 AM

Hi Rama. I try to watch, see and remember what I can . I also take photos to keep at times. Thank you for your comment and you are welcome :)