Heidi Sands Poet Free verse

These Are the Times

On the edge of a shower beneath gray skies,
All the leaves are still with a sense of calmness
On this summer day, cooled down after the heat
The flowers wait for a drink, as birds chirp in the woods
If only everyone could capture this moment
Not a worry amidst nature’s granted peace
These are the times to capture while they last
These are the times to seek all to fill the soul
Like pieces of a puzzle, completing life with fulfillment
Only found in this bountiful creation granted to us
Years of pieces, moments consolidated in memories
                   These are the times

Heidi Sands

7/1/21

Placed with one of the 1st placements.  July 2 Poetry Contest

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Quoth Theraven July 2, 2021 at 11:29 AM Hello Heidi, What better meaning on the edge of a cloud. All these moments before it rains. -Richard Heidi Sands July 2, 2021 at 11:42 AM Yes, on the edge of a cloud would be nice too. Thank you Richard :)

Supraja Kannan July 2, 2021 at 11:13 AM Beautifully depicted the nature's beauty... Thoroughly enjoyed reading it... Heidi Sands July 2, 2021 at 11:22 AM Thank you Supraja. I am happy you enjoyed it. :)

Sam Kauffman July 2, 2021 at 10:06 AM Congratulations on your win, Heidi. You have perfectly captured that quiet before a rainstorm. Have marveled at that stillness many times. Love your creative expressions "on the edge of a shower," "flowers wait for a drink." And yes creation is a gift just like these lines. Blessings to you! Heidi Sands July 2, 2021 at 10:14 AM Thank you very much Sam. I appreciate the kind comment and feedback :)

Christuraj Alex July 2, 2021 at 8:04 AM A lovely poem. Congratulations! Heidi Sands July 2, 2021 at 10:14 AM Thank you very much :)

Vijay Pandit July 2, 2021 at 4:59 AM This is a lovely poem, Heidi, with imagery and feelings. I enjoyed the read. Heidi Sands July 2, 2021 at 6:57 AM I am happy you enjoyed it. Thank you Vijay. I hope you have a nice day :)

Rama Balasubramanian July 2, 2021 at 4:28 AM "Years of pieces, moments consolidated in memories" If only we watched nature more often and collected many memories. Nature is beauty and bliss. Wonderful write, great images, a delight to read. Thanks for sharing Heidi Sands July 2, 2021 at 6:59 AM Hi Rama. I try to watch, see and remember what I can . I also take photos to keep at times. Thank you for your comment and you are welcome :)

Harry Horsman July 2, 2021 at 1:21 AM This is truly a wonderful poem, Heidi, I too love moments like this.. a fav Heidi Sands July 2, 2021 at 6:59 AM Thank you very much Harry. I appreciate the Fav :)

Joanna Daniel July 1, 2021 at 11:05 PM Exquisitely enchanting, Heidi, you portray nature poems so beautifully:) Heidi Sands July 2, 2021 at 7:00 AM Thank you so much Jo . I appreciate your kind comment :)

Joseph May July 1, 2021 at 5:53 PM I enjoyed this beautiful write Heidi... hugs Heidi Sands July 1, 2021 at 6:24 PM I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you Joseph hugs :)

Sotto Poet July 1, 2021 at 5:10 PM Great imagery and great wording across the poem, deep, and your lines flow easily, and I wish you the best of success in the competition. Heidi Sands July 1, 2021 at 5:21 PM Thank you very much Lasaad. I appreciate your feedback and support. Have a nice evening :)