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These Are the Days

These are the days, yet so many are gone Filled with sorrow, like an engraved image Of a broken winged bird on the lawn Days consumed by dark, when light was rare My heart like a boulder weighing me down Past memories lurking, in darkness, glare With no resolution, a ghost through the years Closure remains elusive, like a hawk that stares Continuously, I try to lift myself from the ground To release the sorrow, circulating all around Trying to come to terms with the answers I found Through the years of time, from all of those days So I can take the right turns, in this life of a maze Heidi Sands 5/30/18 Placed 14th in These Are the Days Poetry Contest.

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Date: 6/18/2018 10:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! This was so we written with wonderful phrases and lines. A fave!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/19/2018 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Susan. I appreciate your comment and the fave ! :)
Date: 6/13/2018 2:59:00 PM
very well expressed Heidi, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 3:21:00 PM
Thank you Jan! :)
Date: 6/11/2018 8:49:00 PM
Nicely done Heidi, I feel like you it being a life of mazes....congratulations on your well deserved win.. Hugs Eve
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/12/2018 4:45:00 AM
Oh yes Eve, Life can surely be mazes. Thank you for comment on this :)
Date: 6/11/2018 6:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/11/2018 6:45:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 6/11/2018 1:41:00 PM
Congrats on your fine placement, Heidi xxxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/11/2018 5:33:00 PM
Thank you Mike! :)
Date: 6/11/2018 1:18:00 PM
Congratulations Heidi on your placement in my contest. It seems I have seldom made the right turn in life.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/11/2018 5:33:00 PM
Thank you DT. I appreciate the opportunity to be in your contest. :)
Date: 5/31/2018 1:47:00 AM
Very appropriate uplifting message, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/11/2018 5:32:00 PM
Thank you Subimal. I missed this comment of yours earlier on. I appreciate it :)
Date: 5/30/2018 8:20:00 PM
A very well expressed emotive write Heidi; an awesome one for the contest...Good luck in it!~Che :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2018 8:46:00 PM
Thank you so much Chetyl. I appreciate your support :)
Date: 5/30/2018 4:36:00 PM
So many lines of great impact in this poem, like:Of a broken winged bird on the lawn, and ..Closure remains elusive, like a hawk that stares. Well written poem Heidi..best for a win.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2018 4:43:00 PM
Thank you very much Vijay ! :)
Date: 5/30/2018 12:24:00 PM
Life certainly is a maze, and over time we get older but thankfully wiser, if only we had that wisdom back then. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2018 12:28:00 PM
Thank you Tom. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 5/30/2018 11:15:00 AM
The song those were the days would have been a perfect fit for this poem..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2018 11:34:00 AM
Thank you SO :)
Date: 5/30/2018 10:54:00 AM
Navigating through melancholy emotions...Well expressed Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2018 11:34:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your comment :)

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