Thermos Flask

I found my tartan Thermos flask,
not used it for some time,
the faded squares still visible
beneath a film of grime.
A bit or rust around the base,
the side a dent or two,
the top that doubles for a cup
has split, so that won't do.
But all the same it does it's job
for when one's on the go,
keeps hot things hot and cold things cold
quite how, I do not know.
At least we share a common bond,
our outer shells are battered,
somewhat pasty, worn with time
but none of that stuff matters.
Inside of me my hopes kept warm,
some of my dreams are cool,
contents kept fresh regardless of
the state of this old fool.
When God calls me, takes off my lid
to see what life I've had,
I hope that then, unlike my flask-
I don't smell quite that bad.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 6/1/2019 5:51:00 AM
Very funny! Noticed you have posted for awhile... Hugs...Kim
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Date: 5/4/2019 2:23:00 PM
Love this, Viv, and can't wait to hear news on your book!
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Date: 5/3/2019 1:48:00 PM
Viv, if I need a laugh I just have to click here. You are such an old dear.
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Date: 5/2/2019 9:59:00 AM
This is ingenious Viv. Your ending classic Viv. I loved it! Thank you for the laugh this morning! : ) xxoo
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Date: 4/28/2019 2:59:00 PM
LOL...this is funny and yet very poignant at the same time. What matters the most is that fresh imagination and acquired wisdom inside you, Viv. Great poem!!
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Date: 4/16/2019 11:48:00 PM
Gee whiz Viv … your unique style always has an interesting story about our lifestyle behind your verse. Thanks for sharing - Lindsay
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Date: 4/14/2019 9:19:00 PM
Love your unique slant and metaphor of the thermos, Viv! I so enjoy reading your poetry and love the humor in it! :)
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Date: 4/14/2019 9:47:00 AM
Interesting comparison. Well done :)
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