Thermos Flask

I found my tartan Thermos flask,
not used it for some time,
the faded squares still visible
beneath a film of grime.
A bit or rust around the base,
the side a dent or two,
the top that doubles for a cup
has split, so that won't do.
But all the same it does it's job
for when one's on the go,
keeps hot things hot and cold things cold
quite how, I do not know.
At least we share a common bond,
our outer shells are battered,
somewhat pasty, worn with time
but none of that stuff matters.
Inside of me my hopes kept warm,
some of my dreams are cool,
contents kept fresh regardless of
the state of this old fool.
When God calls me, takes off my lid
to see what life I've had,
I hope that then, unlike my flask-
I don't smell quite that bad.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2019 at 5:51 AM
Very funny! Noticed you have posted for awhile... Hugs...Kim
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 2:23 PM
Love this, Viv, and can't wait to hear news on your book!
Murray Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 1:48 PM
Viv, if I need a laugh I just have to click here. You are such an old dear.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 9:59 AM
This is ingenious Viv. Your ending classic Viv. I loved it! Thank you for the laugh this morning! : ) xxoo
Duet Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 2:59 PM
LOL...this is funny and yet very poignant at the same time. What matters the most is that fresh imagination and acquired wisdom inside you, Viv. Great poem!!
Laurie Avatar
April 16, 2019 at 11:48 PM
Gee whiz Viv … your unique style always has an interesting story about our lifestyle behind your verse. Thanks for sharing - Lindsay
Leiser Avatar
April 14, 2019 at 9:19 PM
Love your unique slant and metaphor of the thermos, Viv! I so enjoy reading your poetry and love the humor in it! :)
Sands Avatar
April 14, 2019 at 9:47 AM
Interesting comparison. Well done :)
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