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there'z no forgetting

.

                   that innocent
                         yesss
                     that smile
                          and
                         yesss
                        i see it
                       that look
                 into mine pupils

          those mesmerizing robin's 
                dawn declarations
                       singing
                  'hind mine see

                         Wait
                  Let me breath

                     that wink
                 just front yourn
                        think
 
                  may's drizzle

             that sweet touch uv
                  spring'z wind
              whisp'n your halo
            into the sun's glister
                    crystalline
                         
                you've just gray'd 
                     uh    hon
                         l'il
                       uh l'il 
                         luv

                          ')

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/6/2024 4:54:00 PM

Hi James, this is so mesmerizing, I like the way this sounds like a morning on the Irish coast and two lovers sharing secrets~

James Peranteau
Date: 5/6/2024 5:21:00 PM

;) ty...theze are childhood sweethearts Michelle....thru 'to, "'til death do they part"....much love