Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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There's the Door

I find it funny
bordering absurd
to hear people ramble on
and spill their beans

they must be all delusional
thinking they are entitled

do they really
not hear themselves

I’m absolutely delighted
to send them on their quirky
and eccentric way

I shake my head 
clear the air and try hard to pretend
they were never here nor there



Submitted on March 26, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND 1097 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

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Christuraj Alex March 27, 2022 at 10:20 PM Right attitude. Beautifully written. Congratulations! Line Gauthier March 29, 2022 at 9:45 AM LOL ~ thanks, Christuraj

Andrea Dietrich March 27, 2022 at 1:13 PM Congrats on the win, Line. For me it depends on what you mean by "spill the beans". I rather like really open people as long as they don't go overboard. Line Gauthier March 29, 2022 at 9:46 AM Thanks, Andrea. Of course, this is about people taking things to extreme...

Julie Achilles February 17, 2020 at 7:21 AM Yes, get off with these people- well said, Julie Line Gauthier February 17, 2020 at 8:43 AM "Off with their heads!" LOL

Krish Radhakrishna February 16, 2020 at 2:19 AM Direct and honest! In summary’ get lost’! Good one!

Gershon Wolf February 15, 2020 at 9:45 PM Hahaha! LOVE the title big-time! Some people, who don't get such subtle hints, could probably use a trap-door as well. Great one! :) Gershon Line Gauthier February 15, 2020 at 11:07 PM LOVE your idea of a trap door, Gershon... strategically placed dangling over a cliff. LOL