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This is my first attempt at this form. I'm not sure if I got it right.
       when you left me
    you took my heart too
      tell me, am I alive








* This form consist of  3 lines 4 5 6, Ending with a question.

1-26-17
Alexis Y.

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Date: 2/23/2017 8:39:00 AM
Really really powerful Alexis!
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Date: 1/27/2017 1:03:00 PM
Very good poem, Alexis. You asked the type of question philosophers have pondered for ages: does our spirit die w/heartbreak? Excellent questionku poetry. Love and joy to you.
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Date: 1/27/2017 9:08:00 AM
Loved it, will have to try my hand at such a lovely form, thanks for the inspiration...
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Date: 1/27/2017 8:57:00 AM
I am impressed! Thanks for writing perfectly in my form. A favourite and a 7!
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Date: 1/27/2017 9:02:00 AM
WoW! Thank you so much for such a awesome comment . I'm glad you liked it:-) Alexis
Date: 1/26/2017 9:10:00 PM
I'm sure Richard will love what you did with his form.
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Date: 1/26/2017 8:04:00 PM
I don't know anything about the form Alexis but really one doesn't need to. A brilliant write in any form:)
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Date: 1/26/2017 8:02:00 PM
very good one!!
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Date: 1/26/2017 4:38:00 PM
I have never seen this form before but now I have and you have written this so wonderfully. Wow, Alexis, this one tears at the heart, you have put so much feeling and emotion into three short but powerful lines. This one blew me away.
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Date: 1/26/2017 4:52:00 PM
WoW! Thanks for such a wonderful comment. This form was created by the talented poet Richard Lamoureux. I'm sure if you did this form it would be amazing. Your comments blow me away. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis
Date: 1/26/2017 3:36:00 PM
Very touching words x
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Date: 1/26/2017 4:54:00 PM
Hi Wendy, Long time no see. Thank you so much. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis
Date: 1/26/2017 3:33:00 PM
In a few words, so much said, oh how I could run with this!!! :) hugs (On I LOLing cause of the captcha I had to type AXE)
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Date: 1/26/2017 3:39:00 PM
Hi Authur, I would love anything you write. Go for it. I appreciate you being the first to comment on my poem:-) AXE