There's No Me Without You

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This is my first attempt at this form. I'm not sure if I got it right.

when you left me
    you took my heart too
      tell me, am I alive








* This form consist of  3 lines 4 5 6, Ending with a question.

1-26-17
Alexis Y.

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John Hamilton

Date: 2/23/2017 8:39:00 AM

Really really powerful Alexis!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/27/2017 1:03:00 PM

Very good poem, Alexis. You asked the type of question philosophers have pondered for ages: does our spirit die w/heartbreak? Excellent questionku poetry. Love and joy to you.

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/27/2017 9:08:00 AM

Loved it, will have to try my hand at such a lovely form, thanks for the inspiration...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/27/2017 8:57:00 AM

I am impressed! Thanks for writing perfectly in my form. A favourite and a 7!

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/27/2017 9:02:00 AM

WoW! Thank you so much for such a awesome comment . I'm glad you liked it:-) Alexis

Tim Smith

Date: 1/26/2017 9:10:00 PM

I'm sure Richard will love what you did with his form.

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/26/2017 8:04:00 PM

I don't know anything about the form Alexis but really one doesn't need to. A brilliant write in any form:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2017 8:02:00 PM

very good one!!

Chris Green

Date: 1/26/2017 4:38:00 PM

I have never seen this form before but now I have and you have written this so wonderfully. Wow, Alexis, this one tears at the heart, you have put so much feeling and emotion into three short but powerful lines. This one blew me away.

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/26/2017 4:52:00 PM

WoW! Thanks for such a wonderful comment. This form was created by the talented poet Richard Lamoureux. I'm sure if you did this form it would be amazing. Your comments blow me away. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis