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My love, we've been hitched for forty years now, Such as auld lumber that is best to burn, What other rapture might my heart allow? What could be too deified than this churn? Let's fashion a taste banter and brainstorm, In poem, praise exulting love and joy, Respect the strength of the bond in key form, With pleasure, we'll seal the deal with the ploy. If I were a known poet or writer, I wish to consider swans and heaven, My mind is no more a spark or lighter, We lack the grace to speak with smooth leaven. Although my love, who needs motivation? You were put in plight by love elation.
Written: September 18, 2022 Anniversary Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sara Kendrick

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Date: 9/23/2022 3:53:00 PM
A pleasure to read, relaxing. Thanks for sharing your entry with us, Lasaad. A poet friend in Texas, Bill P.S. who has now caught up on the poems I've missed this month. :-)
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