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Theres a Way Out

Have i come to the end in the journey of life. i no longer know wich way my path seems to go on. could it mean that this is the end of my forgotten life. All i see is darkness so i sit and wait for the end to come. But as i close my eyes and the only one in my mind is God. I hear a sweet voice in my hear telling me that there is a way out. So i open my eyes and notice its still dark all around. i close my eyes again and let the sweet voice be my guide. Ill be walking with my eyes close until the sun light comes. For with the light comes my second chance in life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/15/2012 6:54:00 AM
Wow! A second chance at life. I love this Isabel. It is soothing and so uplifting. Very good job!!!!!!!!
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Date: 11/10/2012 10:53:00 AM
A really well written poem Manon, but a bit sad. - Welcome to P-Soup - Wishing you a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/10/2012 9:56:00 AM
wonderful piece.. welcome and hugs to your joining the Soup.. Michael
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Date: 11/9/2012 6:01:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you Isabel. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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