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There Will Be Blood

A thousand years ago My children’s children bore life Indeed, silence they have brought But silence they have slain And they swam oceans and seas Journeyed through the sands Stopped by the shadows And lit no light I watched my children’s children Bore another life And I prayed to the suns and moons As the sky dances to its tunes My prayers begun as I begged “Do not undo time, do not slay my sons My daughters will bear children You shall soon see light” And my prayers were heard But a price I must pay “You will watch your children Bathe on your own blood” And a thousand years later My children stopped at none I watched them part ways I watched them day and night They drenched to each other’s blood They made love to one another’s wife Raising soldiers from sons Bathing daughters to be brides But a parent could only bare such Questioning one’s own love Seeking answers never to be found Sleepless nights to endless thoughts And I stood between two paths Calling from the sands of time Summoning all ashes and bones Rise, my sleeping warriors of just

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Date: 6/18/2016 10:46:00 PM
Sarah, I found this to be an interesting story that could easily be expanded into a prose write or short story. I would love to know what inspired this.
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 8/29/2016 12:04:00 PM
The ongoing wars and all that there is...I wanted it to be a prose, but I am not that good yet. Thank you for passing by James :)
Date: 4/12/2016 4:19:00 AM
Wonderful creation Sarah. Entire poem is enriched with so many great lines. Truely impressive. ~7~..........with love
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Date: 4/13/2016 7:11:00 AM
that's very nice of you dalei :)
Date: 4/7/2016 12:42:00 PM
Questioning one’s own love Seeking answers never to be found Sleepless nights to endless thoughts-it was not an ordered universe but the journey was worthwhile and full of expectations.Love Sarah
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 4/13/2016 7:10:00 AM
:) thanks for passing by rajat
Date: 3/22/2016 2:48:00 AM
I was initially confused with your first two lines, but once I imagined it from God's perspective, things began to click. Really sad to see humanity dwindling into this state of chaos and rebellion ... like any parent, how it grieves at the heart. Well penned, Sarah. "bath on your own blood" < I think you meant to say "bathe", but other than that though, good piece.
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Date: 3/22/2016 3:50:00 AM
Will correct that...thank you for your honest words :)
Date: 3/21/2016 2:32:00 PM
Sarah, an outstanding write, well done and I am loving this 7 ~
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/22/2016 3:47:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 3/21/2016 10:15:00 AM
That was a perfect way to meet your work..You have a new fan!
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/22/2016 3:18:00 AM
Very sweet of you Jai :). Thank you.
Date: 3/21/2016 7:51:00 AM
The best piece I have read this morning. A 7 all the way!!
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/22/2016 3:17:00 AM
Thank you Richard :). So nice of you

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