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There Must Be Some Mistake

Playing cards until dawn Jake's idea of fun While his wife is out on the town Jake is not to be outdone... For his good buddies, he orders a cake with a stripper inside, big bosoms all fake At the stroke of midnight ~ there must be some mistake his wife pops out, "Hi, honey. Now watch me shake!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 1/2/2023 7:12:00 PM
So which one of them was more frosted?
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Date: 1/1/2023 7:27:00 PM
LOL…Surprise!
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Date: 1/1/2023 6:20:00 PM
Ha ha ha ha you are too funny BB
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/1/2023 6:25:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha. Glad you like this one, BB.
Date: 1/1/2023 9:26:00 AM
I'll bet he began to shake!! Yikes! That would be quite the surprise for ole' Jake!
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Date: 1/1/2023 1:40:00 AM
Ha ha what a surprise. A sad one at that. Witty and funny...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/1/2023 6:27:00 PM
Thanks you, Michael. Happy 2023 to you!
Date: 12/31/2022 9:05:00 PM
Ha! Ha! That either made or spoiled the evening for Jake and his buddies. Perhaps the stripper went to the wrong house, which would have concerned Jake even more. Take care, Gershon. Shirley
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/1/2023 6:26:00 PM
Deep, profound insights here, Shirley... Lol. Happy New Year to you!
Date: 12/31/2022 8:34:00 PM
LOL! Surprise ! :) Funny. Happy New Year :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/31/2022 8:58:00 PM
Jake got what he was deserved, seems to me... lol. Thanks Heidi! It's exactly New Year's time out east, as i type these words. HNY!

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