There Must Be Some Mistake

Playing cards until dawn
    Jake's idea of fun
  While his wife is out on the town
    Jake is not to be outdone...
  
  For his good buddies, he orders a cake
    with a stripper inside, big bosoms all fake
  At the stroke of midnight ~ there must be some mistake
    his wife pops out, "Hi, honey. Now watch me shake!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kyser Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 7:12 PM
So which one of them was more frosted?
Rodrigues Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 7:27 PM
LOL…Surprise!
May Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 6:20 PM
Ha ha ha ha you are too funny BB
Wolf Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 6:25 PM
Ha, ha, ha. Glad you like this one, BB.
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 9:26 AM
I'll bet he began to shake!! Yikes! That would be quite the surprise for ole' Jake!
Tor Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 1:40 AM
Ha ha what a surprise. A sad one at that. Witty and funny...
Wolf Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 6:27 PM
Thanks you, Michael. Happy 2023 to you!
Hawkins Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 9:05 PM
Ha! Ha! That either made or spoiled the evening for Jake and his buddies. Perhaps the stripper went to the wrong house, which would have concerned Jake even more. Take care, Gershon. Shirley
Wolf Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 6:26 PM
Deep, profound insights here, Shirley... Lol. Happy New Year to you!
Sands Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 8:34 PM
LOL! Surprise ! :) Funny. Happy New Year :)
Wolf Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 8:58 PM
Jake got what he was deserved, seems to me... lol. Thanks Heidi! It's exactly New Year's time out east, as i type these words. HNY!
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