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There Is Such Heartbreak To See

“The number 34 is the magic constant of the 4 by 4 magic square shown on the engraving “Melencolia I“ by Albrecht Dürer. Wikipedia" Oh, my room’s square melancholy! Les femmes préfèr les hommes au Lee*. My bed is empty, my ripped jeans alas, are still on me. It means you did not come. I’m thirty four. I've never been so crushed before. A dusk, a stillness, an alone shade on the wall, a sleeping phone, a melancholical etude of poet’s square solitude. (fr.) Women prefer men in Lee jeans. A pun: it sounds in French like “Women prefer men in bed” (au lit). 18.07.2019 Writing Challenge 2, July 2019- Melancholy- Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart

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Date: 7/29/2019 2:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's Melancholy contest with your unique, as always, poem Kurt! : )
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Date: 7/24/2019 3:43:00 PM
Kurt, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this great write -
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 7/24/2019 6:53:00 PM
Thank you, D.H. Best wishes to you and your contests)
Date: 7/18/2019 8:35:00 PM
Spectacular ending rhyme there, etude and solitude. Really brings this one together nicely. ~ gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/23/2019 9:35:00 PM
OK. I've come again. (The Wolf's at the door)… You placed in the contest. Way to go. I think it was that spectacular ending. ~ gw
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 7/19/2019 4:59:00 PM
Thanks, Wolf. Pls, come again)
Date: 7/18/2019 10:38:00 AM
Kurt, I like this poem. I think I may have to buy some new jeans now. -Richard
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 7/18/2019 12:10:00 PM
Lee, Richards, Lee. Only Lee works, if at all)

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