There Is No Spoon

When the sun has set like a ball of fire
colors like a funeral pyre

crescent moon in deep blue sky
indigo blue that sears the eye

crickets start their monotonous beat
praying in the sultry heat

hand in hand and heart to heart
infants waken with a start

old man takes his dying breath
soul escapes his body's death

spiders cross doorways with their web
a work of art so filled with dread

the rapping on the midnight door
the ghost who's there was here before

a child cries out, a nightmare dreamed
realities blur and rip the seams

what may appear as solid fusion
is just an agreed upon illusion.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 9/25/2009 5:17:00 PM
so true and so vivid! Light & Love
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Date: 4/17/2009 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations my friend on your featued poem this week. Hope to read some in the future. Ernilando
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Date: 4/17/2009 11:51:00 AM
Lovely write! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 4/17/2009 6:30:00 AM
Love the title. I was big Matrix fan before the second and third ones came out. They explore the agreed upon illusion as deeply as you do here. The 'work of art so filled with dread' definitely drives the point home for me. If you're interested I have one like this called 'Identity Theft' which oddly enough is also a couplet form. Take care. -Yoni
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Date: 4/17/2009 3:29:00 AM
Nice work and congratulations on your poem being featured.
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Date: 4/15/2009 10:56:00 AM
Nice work Danielle on being features...Raul
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Date: 4/14/2009 12:10:00 PM
Your Poem is well structured. The title is very interesting. Nice write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week.
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Date: 4/13/2009 3:25:00 PM
Congrulations on being featuered tis week. Nice write....Good Day-Rhonda Kay
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Date: 4/13/2009 11:12:00 AM
Fascinating thought provoking write. Congrats on an awesome feature. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/13/2009 11:07:00 AM
Nice write Danny so the dish did not run away with the spoon, because there was no spoon? Light & Love
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Date: 4/13/2009 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured in the future. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2009 5:28:00 AM
Congrats on being featured this week, lovely write...Aleera
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Date: 4/13/2009 3:51:00 AM
Your title is perfect for this lovely write. My congratulations on your There is no spoon being featured this week, bravo! Cheers, Ernesto
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Date: 4/13/2009 1:05:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Danielle .Rgds Brian
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