''There Is No Place Like Home'' - Wiz

I was just a little lost cat,
            so afraid when that wild, crazy tornado hit;
so, I hopped into a nearby basket lying quite flat,
then, this girl, her dog and me were spinning and wind lit.
                     Along with blown debris we spun,
landing in a fantasy land tattered, confused and undone; 
then, skipping down a yellow brick road singing in the sun.
      She was Dorothy and Toto was my new friend,
               we were joined by odd characters in the end;
                         all travelling to the Wizard to mend.
I peeked out with a loud meow for a chat,
                what do you wish for kitty, so I had to admit'
       I want a "there is no place like home" hun,
                and with you and Toto my life to spend.
                             I was kissed with love not pretend,
              Dorothy clicked her shoes and it was done;
in bed she was sleeping soundly and in her arms I cozy fit,
and our precious Toto dog snored on a nearby pretty mat . . . 

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November 6, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/"There is no place like home"
Rhyming pattern- avav/ccc/ddd/abcd/dcba
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1083-167-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Off To See The Wizard
sponsor, Charlies Messina

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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La France Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 4:46 AM
Thank you Timothy and Francesca for those great comments and congratulations, appreciate ~
Mcguire Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Great Job! I would name that cat Oz!
La France Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 4:45 AM
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December 10, 2018 at 12:45 PM
Congratulations on your win for such a lovely piece. I just love Cats xxx
La France Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 4:45 AM
~.~ meow!!
La France Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 6:56 PM
Thank you Timothy and Jan for visiting my poem and thanks Jan for the congrats~
Allison Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 4:32 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations on your win co stance:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 6:55 PM
Hugs~
Mcguire Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Well done Dear Heart!
La France Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 6:55 PM
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La France Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Eve, thank you for visiting with comment and congratulations
La France Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 9:27 AM
Charles, thank you so much for the contest and for my awesome win, appreciate ~
Roper Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Great imagination and imagery, Dear Heart, enjoyed reading. . ... .Congratulations on your 2nd place win!
La France Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 9:28 AM
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Messina Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 6:36 AM
An adorable poem, Constance! I love this one. Congratulations on your win and thank you so much for supporting my contest...Happy Holidays :) Charlie
La France Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 9:29 AM
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November 25, 2018 at 9:44 PM
Thanks Jan for visiting and for the comment, it was a fun contest to write for ~
Allison Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 4:08 PM
such a cute poem Constance, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 9:30 AM
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La France Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 2:24 PM
Thank you Andrea, Harry, and Kim for visiting my poem and commenting, appreciate ~
Rodrigues Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 9:13 PM
A very sweet poem! This one lifts us up and takes us home! ;)
La France Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 9:30 AM
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Horsman Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 4:08 PM
Oh indeed one would have to change the film script, to accommodate this wonderful addition. Love it..
La France Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 9:31 AM
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November 6, 2018 at 3:18 PM
this is super adorable, Constance!! Coming up with things like this so quickly, you are a real WIZ! (I stayed up late working on the story poem and fell to sleep. Woke up and the contest was closed,. Yikes. I can't even find the picture of the girl on the beach so that I can put it with my poem I wrote!)
La France Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 9:31 AM
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November 6, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Thank you Sun and a big thanks ML for the FAV
Kiser Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 10:07 AM
I love this, had to "fav". Well penned.
La France Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 9:32 AM
~.~ thanks for the fav !!!
Wanter Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Just precious!
La France Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 9:32 AM
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