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There Is a Star With My Name On It

Come walk with me, for the path cares not, the age of your feet. Look at the butterflies on petals, their silence does not care, the language you speak. Listen to the orchestra of birds, they sing with sincerity, care not if you follow God. See how the trees stand so tall, their mature branches care not, about your wallet's wealth. Feel tiny raindrops kiss your face, their refreshing mercy cares not, for the vibrant colour of your skin. Let's bathe in calm waves, for their ripples care not, if you are a boy or a girl. Relax in the glory of the sun, it's warm rays care not, if you are blind, deaf or mute. Drink from cool spring waters, for its juices care not, who's mouth hydrates from it. Here, hold my pen, for the ink will never judge, how you express your scars. In darkness, let us lay together, to gaze at an abundance of stars, they care not, how you spell your name. They shine for us all, regardless of the moon.
Sunday Musings Silent One 8 November 2020 This is an example for my current contest, 'There is a star with my name on it.' I took a unique angle to it. I do not expect poems, similar to this one.
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Zahid Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 9:36 AM
Awesome!! Well penned as usual.. 2nd standa is the best of all... I will try to write a poem with this title, "there is a star with my name on it". Thanks for the inspiration!! And wish me luck ??
Desangre Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 6:24 AM
A beautiful expression. Artfully, colorfully and lovely with great angles, curves and smooth strives.
Daniel Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 2:02 AM
Love your thoughts here, SO:)
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November 20, 2020 at 8:32 AM
Thank you..
Flaherty Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 10:47 AM
Star's not Scars S.O continue to shine on With your magical celestial writting ink
Flaherty Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 12:07 PM
Pleasue
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November 20, 2020 at 8:32 AM
Thank you..
Delaney Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 9:12 AM
Such a beautiful poem to express that nature is for us all. I want this in my FAVS to read over. Beautiful expressions. Best, SuZ
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November 20, 2020 at 8:32 AM
Thank you..
Dutta Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 8:41 PM
Another marvelous entry to your collection of poems. Blessing always
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November 14, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Thank you..
Schiavina Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 8:29 AM
A rose of beauty is your poem with thorns pricking awaking love for ourselves and others more
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November 13, 2020 at 8:30 AM
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Proxenos Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 7:54 AM
Silent On this is so awe inspiring - I really love this poem and that you have thought of everyone 'In darkness let us lay together...... stars ....... they care not how you spell your name. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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November 13, 2020 at 8:21 AM
Thank you..
Horsman Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 10:50 PM
So glad to have read this wondrous poetry, S.O, so inspiring, made my day.
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November 12, 2020 at 11:22 AM
Thank you
Hisham Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 2:34 AM
Beautifully penned. Love the way it flows!
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November 11, 2020 at 9:59 AM
Thank you
Canerdy Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 11:40 AM
Very lovely, appealing, and imaginative, S.O. Janice
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November 11, 2020 at 9:59 AM
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Romios Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 10:48 AM
Excellent verse.. Well crafted.. Pangie xx
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November 11, 2020 at 9:59 AM
Thank you
Devarakonda Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 9:27 PM
Let's rediscover life and nature! An awesome piece of exquisitely woven artwork. Such splendid lines......... Thank you sir!(from your 15-year-old reader)
Devarakonda Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 9:19 AM
Thanks a lot, sir! It would be a great thing to learn from you:)
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November 10, 2020 at 7:41 AM
Thank you.. Good luck with your poetry, if you need any help on here, just ask.
Nicole Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 8:41 PM
"Stars, they care not how you spell your name" Such a beautiful thought. I enjoy being that close to the sky. Your thoughts take me there. :) Brandy
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November 10, 2020 at 7:42 AM
Thank you..
Salapar Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 4:05 PM
I love the poem and the audio with it, it puts me in a relaxing mood to write.
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November 10, 2020 at 7:42 AM
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Crabtree Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 1:35 PM
I think a lot of people should read your words. There are many who are quick to pass judgement on others. Well versed here!
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November 10, 2020 at 7:42 AM
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Roper Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 10:43 AM
Beautiful verse and great example for the contest. I need to hurry up and write something or it will fill up again to fast. Hugs Eve
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November 10, 2020 at 7:42 AM
Thank you..
Chibuikem Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 5:16 AM
They shine for us all ... Let love lead. Exquisite piece ??
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November 9, 2020 at 6:02 AM
Thank you..
Gilmour Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 1:23 AM
Such a beautiful, joyful journey SO I felt as if I was on that journey too, as I read each inspirational word ~ if only... With kindest thoughts Ann xx ~ a FAVE for me, thank you
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November 9, 2020 at 6:02 AM
We should all be on this journey... Thank you..
Buhagiar Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 10:17 PM
Your contest could very well make writers indulge in star names. You took a different path. ~~
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November 9, 2020 at 6:02 AM
Thank you..
Minardi Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 10:09 PM
Wow this is a great poem. I wish more humans are like this care not of thing dividing us. thanks for the visit.
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November 9, 2020 at 6:02 AM
Thank you..
Buehler Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 9:04 PM
Our mother earth loves all of her children just the same. A beautiful poem, Silent One.
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November 9, 2020 at 6:02 AM
Thank you..
Ashley Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 7:33 PM
Nature and art care not to judge, only humans indulge in the harsh practice of judging other humans, and it is especially harsh when it comes to judging oneself. Why can't we just be and let be?! Your profound and thought-provoking pen strikes again, my inspiring friend. Great imagery! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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November 9, 2020 at 6:04 AM
You are right Susan.. thank you..
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 7:16 PM
Very nice! So much does not depend on human judgment and just is. Of that we should be so thankful.
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November 9, 2020 at 6:02 AM
Thank you..
Krutsinger Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 5:57 PM
The imagery pronounced beautiful feelings as I read.
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November 9, 2020 at 6:03 AM
Thank you..
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