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Come walk with me, for the path cares not, the age of your feet. Look at the butterflies on petals, their silence does not care, the language you speak. Listen to the orchestra of birds, they sing with sincerity, care not if you follow God. See how the trees stand so tall, their mature branches care not, about your wallet's wealth. Feel tiny raindrops kiss your face, their refreshing mercy cares not, for the vibrant colour of your skin. Let's bathe in calm waves, for their ripples care not, if you are a boy or a girl. Relax in the glory of the sun, it's warm rays care not, if you are blind, deaf or mute. Drink from cool spring waters, for its juices care not, who's mouth hydrates from it. Here, hold my pen, for the ink will never judge, how you express your scars. In darkness, let us lay together, to gaze at an abundance of stars, they care not, how you spell your name. They shine for us all, regardless of the moon.
Sunday Musings Silent One 8 November 2020 This is an example for my current contest, 'There is a star with my name on it.' I took a unique angle to it. I do not expect poems, similar to this one.

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Date: 2/16/2021 9:36:00 AM
Awesome!! Well penned as usual.. 2nd standa is the best of all... I will try to write a poem with this title, "there is a star with my name on it". Thanks for the inspiration!! And wish me luck ??
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Date: 2/4/2021 6:24:00 AM
A beautiful expression. Artfully, colorfully and lovely with great angles, curves and smooth strives.
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Date: 11/19/2020 2:02:00 AM
Love your thoughts here, SO:)
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Silent One
Date: 11/20/2020 8:32:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/17/2020 10:47:00 AM
Star's not Scars S.O continue to shine on With your magical celestial writting ink
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/20/2020 12:07:00 PM
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Silent One
Date: 11/20/2020 8:32:00 AM
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Date: 11/15/2020 9:12:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem to express that nature is for us all. I want this in my FAVS to read over. Beautiful expressions. Best, SuZ
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Silent One
Date: 11/20/2020 8:32:00 AM
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Date: 11/13/2020 8:41:00 PM
Another marvelous entry to your collection of poems. Blessing always
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Silent One
Date: 11/14/2020 9:23:00 AM
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Date: 11/13/2020 8:29:00 AM
A rose of beauty is your poem with thorns pricking awaking love for ourselves and others more
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Silent One
Date: 11/13/2020 8:30:00 AM
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Date: 11/13/2020 7:54:00 AM
Silent On this is so awe inspiring - I really love this poem and that you have thought of everyone 'In darkness let us lay together...... stars ....... they care not how you spell your name. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Silent One
Date: 11/13/2020 8:21:00 AM
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Date: 11/11/2020 10:50:00 PM
So glad to have read this wondrous poetry, S.O, so inspiring, made my day.
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Silent One
Date: 11/12/2020 11:22:00 AM
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Date: 11/11/2020 2:34:00 AM
Beautifully penned. Love the way it flows!
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Silent One
Date: 11/11/2020 9:59:00 AM
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Date: 11/10/2020 11:40:00 AM
Very lovely, appealing, and imaginative, S.O. Janice
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Silent One
Date: 11/11/2020 9:59:00 AM
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Date: 11/10/2020 10:48:00 AM
Excellent verse.. Well crafted.. Pangie xx
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Silent One
Date: 11/11/2020 9:59:00 AM
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Date: 11/9/2020 9:27:00 PM
Let's rediscover life and nature! An awesome piece of exquisitely woven artwork. Such splendid lines......... Thank you sir!(from your 15-year-old reader)
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Pradyun Devarakonda
Date: 11/10/2020 9:19:00 AM
Thanks a lot, sir! It would be a great thing to learn from you:)
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 7:41:00 AM
Thank you.. Good luck with your poetry, if you need any help on here, just ask.
Date: 11/9/2020 8:41:00 PM
"Stars, they care not how you spell your name" Such a beautiful thought. I enjoy being that close to the sky. Your thoughts take me there. :) Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 7:42:00 AM
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Date: 11/9/2020 4:05:00 PM
I love the poem and the audio with it, it puts me in a relaxing mood to write.
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 7:42:00 AM
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Date: 11/9/2020 1:35:00 PM
I think a lot of people should read your words. There are many who are quick to pass judgement on others. Well versed here!
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 7:42:00 AM
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Date: 11/9/2020 10:43:00 AM
Beautiful verse and great example for the contest. I need to hurry up and write something or it will fill up again to fast. Hugs Eve
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 7:42:00 AM
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Date: 11/9/2020 5:16:00 AM
They shine for us all ... Let love lead. Exquisite piece ??
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2020 6:02:00 AM
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Date: 11/9/2020 1:23:00 AM
Such a beautiful, joyful journey SO I felt as if I was on that journey too, as I read each inspirational word ~ if only... With kindest thoughts Ann xx ~ a FAVE for me, thank you
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2020 6:02:00 AM
We should all be on this journey... Thank you..
Date: 11/8/2020 10:17:00 PM
Your contest could very well make writers indulge in star names. You took a different path. ~~
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2020 6:02:00 AM
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Date: 11/8/2020 10:09:00 PM
Wow this is a great poem. I wish more humans are like this care not of thing dividing us. thanks for the visit.
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2020 6:02:00 AM
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Date: 11/8/2020 9:04:00 PM
Our mother earth loves all of her children just the same. A beautiful poem, Silent One.
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2020 6:02:00 AM
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Date: 11/8/2020 7:33:00 PM
Nature and art care not to judge, only humans indulge in the harsh practice of judging other humans, and it is especially harsh when it comes to judging oneself. Why can't we just be and let be?! Your profound and thought-provoking pen strikes again, my inspiring friend. Great imagery! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2020 6:04:00 AM
You are right Susan.. thank you..
Date: 11/8/2020 7:16:00 PM
Very nice! So much does not depend on human judgment and just is. Of that we should be so thankful.
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2020 6:02:00 AM
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Date: 11/8/2020 5:57:00 PM
The imagery pronounced beautiful feelings as I read.
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2020 6:03:00 AM
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