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Write Eleven Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest, Sponsored by Constance La France. Date written: 04/15/2025

There Is A Place


         Take my outstretched hand...
     Come away with me, my dearest.
       There is a special place for us...
  Our paradise; a wondrous departure 
    From this crazy, maddening world.
 There, we'll be lost in a world of magic 
Let's escape beyond the rainbow's end 
    And be free to happily float about 
 With abandon like carefree butterflies.
 'Tis a peaceful Xanadu only we know.
It teems with such beauty and wonder
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 10:34 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "There Is A Place" write. Happy Easter... Have a blessed day with your win.......
Ibeh Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 10:50 AM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
Crandall Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 2:51 PM
Nice poem - I think it's great to have someone to escape with from the harshness of the world.
Ibeh Avatar
April 16, 2025 at 5:24 PM
Thank you very much, David:-)
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