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There Is a Fence In My Bed

A 38th parallel separates our pillows I try to touch her and she bellows We are like strangers in our own bed Help me break the Berlin wall in my bed

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Joyeeta Neogi

Date: 6/14/2014 7:08:00 PM

The day you break the wall in your head, you can strengthen both of your's thread and things will never occur as you said. - joy

John Pen
Date: 7/2/2014 1:34:00 AM

I bet the wall will come down one day

Kim Van Breda

Date: 5/20/2014 10:26:00 AM

Well written piece on a sensitive and common dilemma Xx~Xx

John Pen
Date: 6/12/2014 12:59:00 AM

Thanks Kim

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/16/2014 5:42:00 AM

Oh.... this is a very sad write. I hope that wall comes down soon!

John Pen
Date: 6/12/2014 1:00:00 AM

Thanks Eileen

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 5/16/2014 4:37:00 AM

We broke the Berlin Wall,keep on try.

John Pen
Date: 6/12/2014 1:04:00 AM

I sure will. Thanks for taking time to read my piece