Darkland Poetry Poet Rhyme

There He Kept Her

Budding romance;
Nothing sweeter.
“Peter, Peter Pumpkin Eater”

Stolen chances;
Love’s depleter.
“Had a wife and couldn’t keep her.”

Acting rash;
His thoughts are hell.
“He put her in a pumpkin shell.”

The crimson flash
bid her farewell.
“There he kept her very well."

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Debra Squyres February 16, 2015 at 3:41 PM How creative !!!! Just love this !!

Funom Makama February 16, 2015 at 12:22 PM I am in love with your lines... This is a great piece and I hope to spend more time on your other works. Thank you for the incredible share

Eileen Manassian February 5, 2015 at 3:50 PM Very well put together poetry, Rachel. Like what you've done with this, but I'm too spooked to check the link. I know...I'm a silly girl!

Liam Mcdaid January 28, 2015 at 8:01 PM beautifully painted piece rachel

Vera Duggan January 26, 2015 at 1:25 AM Hi Rachel, very well done, I haven't had time but I will read the notes out of curiosity.Take care.............Vera.......... Vera Duggan January 26, 2015 at 1:28 AM I read it, sounds like a horror story.

Abdelwaheb Dhaou January 22, 2015 at 10:30 AM Gorgeous piece Rachel Firmin ! I really jubilated at the rich images ! Keep it up !