Then Why

Then, Why?

With life so painful, 
Then...then
Say, why we pass by here?
Because...notice!
There are those moments,
Perhaps even often 
When we are caught
Upon breaths of passing simplicity,
Which raise full years
To joy!

——————————————————————
(c) sally Young eslinger 2/21
Thanks be to God
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Krutsinger Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 9:41 PM
Those moments change everything, and sometimes us forever!
Eslinger Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 6:57 PM
Caren, yes, they do. This one came from Jim smiling at me. I grabbed the smile and locked it in my memory. I had been feeling a bit down before that. So many young poets linger on pain, asking Why? I was responding. Bless U 4 reading
Lindley Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 4:45 AM
We pass by as life offers much. It is up to us to make the most of it despite this dark world setting stumbling blocks in our way. Great poem, poetry is it's own rich reward.. A fav.. God bless.
Eslinger Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 7:14 PM
Thank you much, Robert. You speak truth. And what good we do not see to grab onto, the Lord will keep trying to grace us with til we See it. The Lord bless you, my good friend!
Eslinger Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 7:03 PM
Thank you much, Robert. You speak truth. And what good we do not see to grab onto, the Lord will keep trying to grace us with til we See it. The Lord bless you, my good friend!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 2:21 AM
Great write. ~~
Eslinger Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 10:06 PM
Thank you, Victor! I’ve slept this day away...oh well. Hope you are good!
Blown Avatar
February 6, 2021 at 3:42 PM
...nice write....'a passing simplicity...year' ....as...eternity wise in a second... stan
Eslinger Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 7:11 PM
Ohhhh Stan Stan Stan, you made me LOL. I am making an effort to think in brief, but still using long legal pads haha no really...can’t read my own writing anymore. Give Canada a kiss for me. Your comments glimmer...
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace