Then Came the Sun

This night they were lions
sleek and powerful
entangled in the equinox
of midnight and morning...

Then came the sun
ending a night in which
seduction was her only intent
she the lover
the courtesan
dark as night
he the crazy poet..

Prompting each other
to do what to them pleases
unconcerned with darkness and light
damp white sheets
covered heartbeat rhythmic...

A feast of tongue and touch
the sounds of gentle moans
such soft slow love
where none existed before
he was hungry
she was hungry
they fed each other...

From her dominion
she was lovely
she was precious
wrapped in silence...

They loved
they slept
then came the sun
gone was she
slipping away between the barrier
of dusk and dawn..

Back to the secret place
of refuge and whispers
she was not meant to be
with her new found lover
in the daylight hours..

Leaving behind
two tiny holes in his neck
perhaps she was
a vampire...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 5:00 PM
Ken A thrilling and passionate write. Full of danger and darkness, with a hint of seduction and longing. Nice job
Carroll Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 5:03 PM
Hi Robin, Thank you for visiting this one.. Ken
Gasun Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 6:26 AM
Another passionate poem written by a very talented poet like you my dear friend Ken. A great write indeed. Thank you so much for sharing this gem of yours and your superb talent. Have a great day! love lots, Leonora
Carroll Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 6:40 AM
Hi Leonora, Thank you for taking time to read though my verse.. Ken
Tacito Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 9:06 AM
Dangerously seductive. Ah, the price one pays for a thrill of the night when the sunrise reveals its true colors. Excellent job!
Carroll Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 10:14 AM
Hi Drake, Thank you for the visit and wonderful comment... Ken
Deschler Avatar
September 26, 2013 at 1:11 PM
This was an awesome poem, Ken! I loved the vampire twist at the end. A very passionate and dark write. Fantastic work!...You might like my poem titled, "My Despair", it also has a vampire theme...Thank you for the nice comments. once again!
Carroll Avatar
September 26, 2013 at 2:19 PM
Hi Kelly, Thanks for stopping by, always a pleasure to read from you.. Ken
Kendrick Avatar
September 26, 2013 at 7:52 AM
Cute one..Enjoyed reading this one today..Passionate work with a surprise ending..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Carroll Avatar
September 26, 2013 at 9:37 AM
Hi Sara, Thank you for the kind visit as well.. Ken
Onclaud Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 11:32 PM
passion rules with a tinge of mystery here, ken.. lile the way you slipped some suspense in the end... awesome!..:) huggs
Carroll Avatar
September 26, 2013 at 1:43 AM
Hi Nette, Thank you for the lovely visit.. Ken
Mcdaid Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 4:07 PM
AMAZING BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITING KEN MY DEAR FRIEND
Carroll Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 4:14 PM
Hey Liam, Thanks buddy always a pleasure to read from you.. Your friend, Ken
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