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Then Came the Sun

This night they were lions sleek and powerful entangled in the equinox of midnight and morning... Then came the sun ending a night in which seduction was her only intent she the lover the courtesan dark as night he the crazy poet.. Prompting each other to do what to them pleases unconcerned with darkness and light damp white sheets covered heartbeat rhythmic... A feast of tongue and touch the sounds of gentle moans such soft slow love where none existed before he was hungry she was hungry they fed each other... From her dominion she was lovely she was precious wrapped in silence... They loved they slept then came the sun gone was she slipping away between the barrier of dusk and dawn.. Back to the secret place of refuge and whispers she was not meant to be with her new found lover in the daylight hours.. Leaving behind two tiny holes in his neck perhaps she was a vampire...

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Date: 11/24/2013 5:00:00 PM
Ken A thrilling and passionate write. Full of danger and darkness, with a hint of seduction and longing. Nice job
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Ken Carroll
Date: 11/24/2013 5:03:00 PM
Hi Robin, Thank you for visiting this one.. Ken
Date: 9/30/2013 6:26:00 AM
Another passionate poem written by a very talented poet like you my dear friend Ken. A great write indeed. Thank you so much for sharing this gem of yours and your superb talent. Have a great day! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 9/30/2013 6:40:00 AM
Hi Leonora, Thank you for taking time to read though my verse.. Ken
Date: 9/27/2013 9:06:00 AM
Dangerously seductive. Ah, the price one pays for a thrill of the night when the sunrise reveals its true colors. Excellent job!
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Date: 9/27/2013 10:14:00 AM
Hi Drake, Thank you for the visit and wonderful comment... Ken
Date: 9/26/2013 1:11:00 PM
This was an awesome poem, Ken! I loved the vampire twist at the end. A very passionate and dark write. Fantastic work!...You might like my poem titled, "My Despair", it also has a vampire theme...Thank you for the nice comments. once again!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/26/2013 2:19:00 PM
Hi Kelly, Thanks for stopping by, always a pleasure to read from you.. Ken
Date: 9/26/2013 7:52:00 AM
Cute one..Enjoyed reading this one today..Passionate work with a surprise ending..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/26/2013 9:37:00 AM
Hi Sara, Thank you for the kind visit as well.. Ken
Date: 9/25/2013 11:32:00 PM
passion rules with a tinge of mystery here, ken.. lile the way you slipped some suspense in the end... awesome!..:) huggs
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Date: 9/26/2013 1:43:00 AM
Hi Nette, Thank you for the lovely visit.. Ken
Date: 9/25/2013 4:07:00 PM
AMAZING BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITING KEN MY DEAR FRIEND
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/25/2013 4:14:00 PM
Hey Liam, Thanks buddy always a pleasure to read from you.. Your friend, Ken

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