Then and Now-Cheese and Whine
Oh, I love your raven lustrous silky hair
He used to say, touching it with such care
Now—strands clog the bath vanity
Why don’t you donate it for charity?
I give him my deepest pulverizing stare
Written on:08/02/2016
Contest:'Cheese and Whine' by Phillip Garcia
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