Then a Rainbow Came

No sunshine came with warm refrain
 No kids came out to laugh and play
 Just gray clouds and the falling rain
 Then a rainbow came

 A lad came out that rainy day
 Filled with wonder he couldn't contain
 Amidst the rain and skies of gray

 An umbrella he did obtain
 Red, with white polka dot array
 He gazed across the misty plain
 Then a rainbow came
            ---
 9/24/17
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Stephenson Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 2:17 PM
Lovely! Enjoyed reading this Joseph :-)
May Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Thank you Leigh
Ashley Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 7:54 PM
A very lovely poem Joseph. 'Then a rainbow came' - such a beautiful and sincere sentiment. I love this form and how that wondrous line repeats. Warmest regards.
May Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Thank you Susan
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:14 PM
Wonderful little poem you got from seeing that picture, Joseph. This is one I want to get started on very soon!
May Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:30 PM
Thank you Andrea
One Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 10:19 AM
Rainbow always comes after the rain.. There is always hope after the rain... Great message of hope..
May Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:29 PM
Thank you S1
Daniel Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 6:28 AM
Cute and lovely roundel, Joseph:)
May Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:29 PM
Thank you Jo
Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 1:38 AM
- A gray day ... that gets beautiful when the rainbow shines :) - Lovely written, Joseph :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:29 PM
Thank you Anne
Pandit Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 7:16 PM
I like the lyrics and the flow of this poem--best wishes Joseph for a win!
May Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:28 PM
Thank you Vijay
Allison Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 5:02 PM
what a charming poem Jospeh i have never attempted this form before:-) hugs jan xx
May Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 5:08 PM
Thank you Jan
Sands Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 4:36 PM
Excellent Joseph. I love this one :)
May Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 4:57 PM
Thank you so much Heidi...
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